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4canadianscanget
New style. New fandom. Thank you for experimenting cause so far I like the concoction you've created very enjoyable. Cheers CCG.
4canadianscangetNew style. New fandom. Thank you for experimenting cause so far I like the concoction you've created very enjoyable. Cheers CCG.
8/12/2011 c2 7godsdaughter77
This is a great story so far! I look forward to seeing the last chapter! Thanks for sharing.
7godsdaughter77This is a great story so far! I look forward to seeing the last chapter! Thanks for sharing.
8/9/2011 c2 JemJoy
Can't wait to see what happens next :D
Can't wait to see what happens next :D
8/9/2011 c2 19HuffynDK
Welcome to the fandom. I really enjoyed these two parts with it from Neals POV and Peters POV. Nice way of weaving the two together and showing what they mean to each other without a lot of fluff.
19HuffynDKWelcome to the fandom. I really enjoyed these two parts with it from Neals POV and Peters POV. Nice way of weaving the two together and showing what they mean to each other without a lot of fluff.
8/9/2011 c2 Audrey 2
Only one more chapter? But it's so good!
Only one more chapter? But it's so good!
8/9/2011 c2 7huge sg1 fan
poor neal. he lost the love of his life and now he thought he had lost his best frined, his partner, his family. i think this is a really good story so far. can't wait to read more. hope you update again soon. :)
7huge sg1 fanpoor neal. he lost the love of his life and now he thought he had lost his best frined, his partner, his family. i think this is a really good story so far. can't wait to read more. hope you update again soon. :)
8/9/2011 c2 21Miran Anders
Excellent. Tightly written, full, recognizable characters, layers of suspense and unfolding reactions. I like this a lot. And I look forward to the rest.
Best,
Miran
21Miran AndersExcellent. Tightly written, full, recognizable characters, layers of suspense and unfolding reactions. I like this a lot. And I look forward to the rest.
Best,
Miran
8/9/2011 c2 18ray4ruffles
just one chapter left? sad face :( i love this piece, and the new chapter does a great job filling in the blanks. you have a great flow, and yet the scene is still shaky enough to convey the urgency and chaos of what's happening. i can't wait to see what's next- maybe you'll decide to keep going? update soon!
18ray4rufflesjust one chapter left? sad face :( i love this piece, and the new chapter does a great job filling in the blanks. you have a great flow, and yet the scene is still shaky enough to convey the urgency and chaos of what's happening. i can't wait to see what's next- maybe you'll decide to keep going? update soon!
8/9/2011 c2 CandyCakes
I like this story, kinda reminds me of tne first season with the trust between Neal and Peter. Awesome job, I look forward to the next chapter!
I like this story, kinda reminds me of tne first season with the trust between Neal and Peter. Awesome job, I look forward to the next chapter!
8/9/2011 c2 21Aranna Undomiel
Oh I really like this so far. It's always nice to see a more vulnerable side of Neal and Peter's protective one. Seeing Neal like this just breaks my heart.
Looking forward to the next chapter ;D
21Aranna UndomielOh I really like this so far. It's always nice to see a more vulnerable side of Neal and Peter's protective one. Seeing Neal like this just breaks my heart.
Looking forward to the next chapter ;D
8/9/2011 c2 85Bookjunk
It is almost impossible, but I enjoyed this chapter even more than the previous one. I just love how much those two care about each other and how worried they are. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter.
85BookjunkIt is almost impossible, but I enjoyed this chapter even more than the previous one. I just love how much those two care about each other and how worried they are. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/9/2011 c1 Bookjunk
Really enjoyed the beginning. Peter and Neal were written excellently in character. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Really enjoyed the beginning. Peter and Neal were written excellently in character. I'm looking forward to reading more.