7/6/2012 c1 Guest
love your story... its a bitter sweet something like lemonade... but can you just finished it.. because i feel your story isnt finished yet...

11/17/2011 c10 Kkornelia
Dang... Flay's taking advantage of practically everything and Yzak's letting her. (I mean... think about the credit card bills! DX) But I suppose since Yzak's so freakin' rich the amount of cost doesn't even make his flinch. {Oh, how I envy...)

About the part where Yzak suddenly thought of his mother when looking at the diamonds, I Lolled. Actually, I can also picture Flay and Ezalia getting along quite nicely because of their possible similar interests and personality(or at least when and how I picture a not too serious Ezalia Joule, out of work). Heck, Ezalia's practically the mirror image of a mature/grown-up Flay Allster. XD

11/17/2011 c10 Fate Camiswhil
! this was so sappy! but I loved it! *squeals!*

God, I love Flay...XD

when Yzak told her to go away and when he didn't react with the chocolate, it really emphasized Flay's resilience... I see myself in her with that... Just shrugging things off and carrying on with what makes her happy, even for just a little while... you know, it's so easy to just not think about things and go on... ugh, life sucks...XD

anyway, thanks for the double update!

I'll go read the next now...^^

11/16/2011 c9 26NEBSparky86
Hey man, I don't have much experience in writting fanfics either but it doesn't stop me from writing them. A good writer learns to keep going and search for inspiration. I always search for inspiration. I wouldn't know where to look for insipration because everyone has their own places of inspiration. So don't stop writing this fanfic. I got too many fanfics I'm trying to write but I'm not stopping now.

11/7/2011 c8 Kkornelia
Hope you don't mind me saying this, but Chapter 7 Reunion seems like it just popped out from no where... not to mention Flay's reunion with Kira and the others seemed awfully light and cheerful despite the strained relationship during war. And like what I mentioned before, the serious plot just doesn't fit a light-hearted story like this.

Yzak has a soft spot for his maids (snickers). Maybe that's why his maids are a bunch of fangirls. I thought it was really cute how Yzak softened up to Kyuu and how Yzak wanted to bring Flay along with him to Earth (despite this was a decision made due to revenge.) I mean- Flay was feeling lonely after all. and he was like "I'm taking you with me." Kyaahh! so kawaii.

I don't know... To be honest, I find this story a bit confusing and of no direction, but there are several parts in here about Yzak and Flay that are too cute to resist. It's those small little things, those light-refreshing little moments that tends to remind me how cute these two could be as a couple.

Thanks for the update.

11/5/2011 c7 Fate Camiswhil
I love this chapter!

I liked how you wrote this out!^^ It's a lot like how I would want the series to go if Flay and Stella was alive...X3

I always knew Cagalli and Flay won't get along...XD but that was fun...^^

When Athrun and Dearka saw through Yzak, I couldn't help but smile... that was so nice... they shouldv'e done that in the series...XD

"They even sleep in the same room before" & "And my sweet pumpkin told me Kira protected Archangel for Flay's sake" ~ this lines are just so true! If Flay wasn't there on Archangel, Kira wouldn't have made that decision... and everyone else stayed on archangel based solely on Flay's decision... too bad, a lot of narrow-minded people forgot about those...

"Yes we did but I know Kira is happy with Lacus now, right Kira?"~ I didn't think Flay could say things like this... I was kinda hoping to hear something like this instead: "I dumped him." LOL! *I'm so bad* XD

Lacus showing sings of jealousy... now that would've been cute! I wish something like that really happened...^^

Loved this chapter!

by the way, did you by any chance update two chapters at once...? I don't remember seeing you update chapter 7, it was just instantly became chapter 7 and 8...

anyway, gotta go to the next...^^

10/29/2011 c6 29Fate Camiswhil
tahahahaha...XD

you just gotta love Dearka!^^ he's always the best man for the job!

I liked that part where the two girls felt Yzak's presence without looking back... it's like "the devil is among us", kind of thing...XD

"Did you make his soul, if he ever got one, leave his body for a second?" ~ I LOL'ed at that! Yzak's just too amusing! XD

Too cute! so Yzak and Kyuu are getting along now, huh? and Kyuu betrayed Flay? hahaha...XD

at first I thought her cooking was fine because she was a good actress to not give herself away but no... and that was pure gold! XD

loved it!

update soon!

and I'll see yah then...^^

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