8/10/2011 c12 32Sergeant Daniel
Wow, now that was unexpected. I hope Bacha is okay. I'm still wondering if Keiichi has permement eye damage. ANyway update soon.
*hugs toster* I love my toster.
Wow, now that was unexpected. I hope Bacha is okay. I'm still wondering if Keiichi has permement eye damage. ANyway update soon.
*hugs toster* I love my toster.
8/10/2011 c11 Sergeant Daniel
Sorry I haven't reviewed this chapter until now. I was busy with a story that I'm working on. Anyway, WHOOOOO! Toster! *hugs toster* Mine, all mine. Now I can see Mion and Keiichi in real life, yea! Anyway off to read the next chapter:D
Sorry I haven't reviewed this chapter until now. I was busy with a story that I'm working on. Anyway, WHOOOOO! Toster! *hugs toster* Mine, all mine. Now I can see Mion and Keiichi in real life, yea! Anyway off to read the next chapter:D
8/10/2011 c12 AnimeCrazy195
Uh oh! poor Ba-chan! Somethings ALWAYS HAPPENING! But its sounds like the story can only get better. Keep it up! You've been great so far! :D
Uh oh! poor Ba-chan! Somethings ALWAYS HAPPENING! But its sounds like the story can only get better. Keep it up! You've been great so far! :D
8/9/2011 c11 AnimeCrazy195
Such a dark road to this point, but it sounds like things have gotten better for Mion (with her friends at least). I know she can't get off from the drug abuse and stuff that easily! Hope to see more!
Such a dark road to this point, but it sounds like things have gotten better for Mion (with her friends at least). I know she can't get off from the drug abuse and stuff that easily! Hope to see more!
8/8/2011 c11 James Birdsong
You're welcome. Cool chapter
You're welcome. Cool chapter
8/7/2011 c10 James Birdsong
Oh cool answer. Hm anyhow good chapter
Oh cool answer. Hm anyhow good chapter
8/7/2011 c9 James Birdsong
I do not have an answer for what it represents
I do not have an answer for what it represents
8/5/2011 c10 Sergeant Daniel
A toster oven? Why not a Mion plushi or at the very least a pet cicada. Anyway, I'm glad I got it right. it just shows that I read everything. I wonder if Keiichi eye is healed or permeantly damage, you need to mention that in the next chapter or show. Oh, and have Keiichi try and talk to Mion again, maybe that will make things interesting. Anyway update Soon:D
A toster oven? Why not a Mion plushi or at the very least a pet cicada. Anyway, I'm glad I got it right. it just shows that I read everything. I wonder if Keiichi eye is healed or permeantly damage, you need to mention that in the next chapter or show. Oh, and have Keiichi try and talk to Mion again, maybe that will make things interesting. Anyway update Soon:D
8/5/2011 c9 Sergeant Daniel
Aww, poor cicada. You need to let Mion keep it. I would:P Anyway from what I can see, in Mion dreams, the chains are the chains of her addictions. Addictions grab hold of their victims and never lets go. However they will be loosen if the person goes and gets some help to deal with it. In Mions case since she has yet told anyone about her addictions the chain is holding fast to her, keeping her under the water. Which brings me to the light. The light is what was your joy before the addiction. It's kinda hard to remember the good times you had when you are full of guilt and sorrow.
Anyway I hope I'm correct in some way, and update soon:D
Aww, poor cicada. You need to let Mion keep it. I would:P Anyway from what I can see, in Mion dreams, the chains are the chains of her addictions. Addictions grab hold of their victims and never lets go. However they will be loosen if the person goes and gets some help to deal with it. In Mions case since she has yet told anyone about her addictions the chain is holding fast to her, keeping her under the water. Which brings me to the light. The light is what was your joy before the addiction. It's kinda hard to remember the good times you had when you are full of guilt and sorrow.
Anyway I hope I'm correct in some way, and update soon:D
8/4/2011 c8 Sergeant Daniel
Oh noez, Mion is getting more emo by the chapter. Oh I hope Keiichi is alright, update soon. This is really good.
Oh noez, Mion is getting more emo by the chapter. Oh I hope Keiichi is alright, update soon. This is really good.
8/4/2011 c8 James Birdsong
You're welcome. Very good eighth chapter.
You're welcome. Very good eighth chapter.
8/3/2011 c7 James Birdsong
Good five chapters
Good five chapters
8/2/2011 c6 Sergeant Daniel
Wow, it's a wonder what drugs do to you. I feel bad for Mion. She is going through all of this and her friends don't seems to care. Heartless jerks. Anyway update soon, I want to find out what happens next:D
Wow, it's a wonder what drugs do to you. I feel bad for Mion. She is going through all of this and her friends don't seems to care. Heartless jerks. Anyway update soon, I want to find out what happens next:D
8/1/2011 c5 Sergeant Daniel
Holy crap, Mion needs to take some anger pills...WAIT I DIDN"T MEAN IT! *slaps forehead* Crap what did I just do. ANyway update soon, because this story is awesome.
P.S Yea you are going to write more stories with Kichi and Mion! I can't wait.
Holy crap, Mion needs to take some anger pills...WAIT I DIDN"T MEAN IT! *slaps forehead* Crap what did I just do. ANyway update soon, because this story is awesome.
P.S Yea you are going to write more stories with Kichi and Mion! I can't wait.
7/30/2011 c4 Sergeant Daniel
I totaly love this story. I wonder what Mion is going to do next? Anyway update soon:D
I totaly love this story. I wonder what Mion is going to do next? Anyway update soon:D