for Raven of the Past and Present8/28/2012 c1 Izabell Hitachiin
i LOVE this story so far please update soon you just earned yourself a faithfull reader :) plz update!
i LOVE this story so far please update soon you just earned yourself a faithfull reader :) plz update!
8/1/2011 c1 
1ArabianNinja
Lol, this chapter was epic :D I normally am not a fan of OCs but Rave is just awesome! I curious what the next chapter is gonna be like :3
1ArabianNinjaLol, this chapter was epic :D I normally am not a fan of OCs but Rave is just awesome! I curious what the next chapter is gonna be like :3
7/23/2011 c1 5Phil-0
u've matched the characters personality perfectly, i just laughed my ass off at the end, keep up the good work
5Phil-0u've matched the characters personality perfectly, i just laughed my ass off at the end, keep up the good work
7/22/2011 c1 xIzumi-chan
HAHAHA!
'Why am I on a team with a flirt and stripper?'
Lol!
This is good so far! Keep it up! :D
HAHAHA!
'Why am I on a team with a flirt and stripper?'
Lol!
This is good so far! Keep it up! :D