for From Fake Dreams11h c40 NoobdockSaint
In case anyone's wondering based on my previous comment, the writing makes a gradual but vast improvement as the story goes on. i can't say i love how everyone blames shirou for essentially keeping them all alive, harped on over and over and over how he'll pay for his actions. Even if most everyone saying it would be dead if not for said actions. but it's really a very well thought out and written story. it really makes me believe it is, or at least could be, a cannonical part of the Fate\Stay universe. author has done a tremdous job.
In case anyone's wondering based on my previous comment, the writing makes a gradual but vast improvement as the story goes on. i can't say i love how everyone blames shirou for essentially keeping them all alive, harped on over and over and over how he'll pay for his actions. Even if most everyone saying it would be dead if not for said actions. but it's really a very well thought out and written story. it really makes me believe it is, or at least could be, a cannonical part of the Fate\Stay universe. author has done a tremdous job.
20h c78 kojonyamekeappiah
so what is shirou's justification for hating archer, ubw shirou was the one in the right in their fight cuz their dream of being a ally of justice wasn't wrong.
but this shirou doesn't have an argument to be right with, archer just wants to stop being a CG
so what is shirou's justification for hating archer, ubw shirou was the one in the right in their fight cuz their dream of being a ally of justice wasn't wrong.
but this shirou doesn't have an argument to be right with, archer just wants to stop being a CG
5/20 c78 Anon
Is this story dead? I noticed that ThirdFang hasn't updated in like 2 months. Is everything ok? Really liked his fics, so it'd be a shame if he's no longer updating
Is this story dead? I noticed that ThirdFang hasn't updated in like 2 months. Is everything ok? Really liked his fics, so it'd be a shame if he's no longer updating
5/19 c16 Guest
Why you don't use "I am the bone of my sword" Arya ?
Why you don't use "I am the bone of my sword" Arya ?
5/16 c78 
1Prince Johnathan of Jupiter
Just relized that Third Fang has been carrying this story for 13 years now... cant believe how fast the time has gone. This is the reason I recommend his stories to everyone I know. Thank you as always for the effort on this and YAWALEH/TTRT
1Prince Johnathan of JupiterJust relized that Third Fang has been carrying this story for 13 years now... cant believe how fast the time has gone. This is the reason I recommend his stories to everyone I know. Thank you as always for the effort on this and YAWALEH/TTRT
4/16 c78 21Happy1K1nob1
Unexpected update to a great story. The "twist" ending was kinda meh - as in "Wow. Yes he really is being that petty, didn't see that before but I can kinda see it character-wise, so it's not all that surprising. Also, I wanna know the answer too, but A) it's not important to me and B) the next chapter isn't gonna show up for 3-6 months, I feel, and I know how to wait". Half the twists in this story were *way* more surprising (especially Iri showing up - both in general and at the Apostle fight / Job Request Board party).
Anyways, lack of enthusiasm aside, this is honestly an *amazing* story and I've been loving it all through. And for the Sciatica thing, I recommend going to a Chiropractor. I visited one when mine got a little nasty (not enough for me to stop working, but enough to be nasty painful and leave me limping) and he set me up to go pain free for two years(!), and is already helping massively with the resurgence I'm dealing with right now (it's already not crippling to get out of bed! If it weren't for the small surges of pain or the attempts to Charlie Horse when I walk from my basement to the car, I could even be fooled into thinking it was already fixed with a few minor adjustments to my spine, so I highly recommend the check to see if it *is* a spinal thing that could be cleared out almost completely with adjustments like that, like it was for me).
As for the patience?
Good work like this is worth being patient, always worth the wait. And outside of struggling to get into Once Again, everything I've read from you has been worth it.
See you in the next chapter!
21Happy1K1nob1Unexpected update to a great story. The "twist" ending was kinda meh - as in "Wow. Yes he really is being that petty, didn't see that before but I can kinda see it character-wise, so it's not all that surprising. Also, I wanna know the answer too, but A) it's not important to me and B) the next chapter isn't gonna show up for 3-6 months, I feel, and I know how to wait". Half the twists in this story were *way* more surprising (especially Iri showing up - both in general and at the Apostle fight / Job Request Board party).
Anyways, lack of enthusiasm aside, this is honestly an *amazing* story and I've been loving it all through. And for the Sciatica thing, I recommend going to a Chiropractor. I visited one when mine got a little nasty (not enough for me to stop working, but enough to be nasty painful and leave me limping) and he set me up to go pain free for two years(!), and is already helping massively with the resurgence I'm dealing with right now (it's already not crippling to get out of bed! If it weren't for the small surges of pain or the attempts to Charlie Horse when I walk from my basement to the car, I could even be fooled into thinking it was already fixed with a few minor adjustments to my spine, so I highly recommend the check to see if it *is* a spinal thing that could be cleared out almost completely with adjustments like that, like it was for me).
As for the patience?
Good work like this is worth being patient, always worth the wait. And outside of struggling to get into Once Again, everything I've read from you has been worth it.
See you in the next chapter!
4/16 c78 rosa
Gaaaahhh, things are turning up. Had to sub to the pa-eon cause I needed that sweet, sweet preview. Amazing work as always !
Gaaaahhh, things are turning up. Had to sub to the pa-eon cause I needed that sweet, sweet preview. Amazing work as always !
4/11 c78 8red neo ranger
Loved it just did a reread to catch up and I love every second of it but did notice in last couple chapter shirou name was spelled different a couple different times
8red neo rangerLoved it just did a reread to catch up and I love every second of it but did notice in last couple chapter shirou name was spelled different a couple different times
4/6 c1 1Saiyanwarrior22
Ive now spent the past 5 weeks reading this long ahh story that i have throughly enjoyed. I love the interactions between characters and all that other cool stuff. We all love a shirou who isnt a doormat. Obviously as oath under snow and ubw are my favorite shirou’s, this shirou would by default be up there, as he has the I actually can fight on my own and the personality of the goat oath under snow shirou. But ive come to say, i figured out how you’ll end the story! With shirou’s reality marble curse, when he finally uses it against archer, with archer potentially being older than almost everyone, even merem (good hint), shirou’s curse will hit him like a truck. And with him already wanting to end his existence, it will only make it easier for archer to finally step down and hopefully already have a way to leave the counter force, and the curse will just help him be at peace. Thats just my smooth lil guess tho, we gonna see if im right or not soon enough
1Saiyanwarrior22Ive now spent the past 5 weeks reading this long ahh story that i have throughly enjoyed. I love the interactions between characters and all that other cool stuff. We all love a shirou who isnt a doormat. Obviously as oath under snow and ubw are my favorite shirou’s, this shirou would by default be up there, as he has the I actually can fight on my own and the personality of the goat oath under snow shirou. But ive come to say, i figured out how you’ll end the story! With shirou’s reality marble curse, when he finally uses it against archer, with archer potentially being older than almost everyone, even merem (good hint), shirou’s curse will hit him like a truck. And with him already wanting to end his existence, it will only make it easier for archer to finally step down and hopefully already have a way to leave the counter force, and the curse will just help him be at peace. Thats just my smooth lil guess tho, we gonna see if im right or not soon enough
4/3 c78 3mokuryu
Hello
I rewiew you here because I love your stories and I want to make a traduction of them in french, beginning by yet Again.
So I am here to ask your authorisation.
in hope of a reply.
mokuryu out.
3mokuryuHello
I rewiew you here because I love your stories and I want to make a traduction of them in french, beginning by yet Again.
So I am here to ask your authorisation.
in hope of a reply.
mokuryu out.
3/26 c78 tomasmarcolini
Hello thanks for the chapter. I have question, does the zelretch of this universe knows of the Family, maybe is he a part of it, or this history is outside oofthat multiverse?
Hello thanks for the chapter. I have question, does the zelretch of this universe knows of the Family, maybe is he a part of it, or this history is outside oofthat multiverse?
3/26 c78 codywhite162
This story has been fantastic! I am sad to hear that it is coming to an end but I have enjoyed the ride nonetheless. Also we are going to finally hear why Shirou hates Archer in this story because I confess I was curious about that too. I am excited to see what his reasoning is though and just read more of this awesome story.
This story has been fantastic! I am sad to hear that it is coming to an end but I have enjoyed the ride nonetheless. Also we are going to finally hear why Shirou hates Archer in this story because I confess I was curious about that too. I am excited to see what his reasoning is though and just read more of this awesome story.
3/22 c78 1ZerothKelvin
So, I just spent about 8 days and 50% of my uptime to actually read this bullshit, which is the equivalent of reading War and Peace 2.5 times staight, if you exclude omakes and autor notes and somehow I do not have any regrets.
Congrats.
You've made me question my reason for existance and substantionaly lowered my self-esteem level in a process and I'm in a fanfic-reading business for about 15 years.
Thank you for the experience.
I hope the burden of finishing this story will not fall onto your descendants, cause I've acquired a strong impression that you've made it your life goal to challenge Nasu and Kishimoto in a bullshitterry contest. One lifespawn alone might not be enough to do so I'm afraid.
1ZerothKelvinSo, I just spent about 8 days and 50% of my uptime to actually read this bullshit, which is the equivalent of reading War and Peace 2.5 times staight, if you exclude omakes and autor notes and somehow I do not have any regrets.
Congrats.
You've made me question my reason for existance and substantionaly lowered my self-esteem level in a process and I'm in a fanfic-reading business for about 15 years.
Thank you for the experience.
I hope the burden of finishing this story will not fall onto your descendants, cause I've acquired a strong impression that you've made it your life goal to challenge Nasu and Kishimoto in a bullshitterry contest. One lifespawn alone might not be enough to do so I'm afraid.