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8/19/2011 c6 9Slayer Anderson
Here's my contribution to your 300 goal.

Very good story, looking forward to reading more.

ja ne.
8/19/2011 c6 mercy0880
Normally I wouldn't review more than a few times, but if it'll help keep you motivated to keep up with this one I'll gladly review every chapter, Fate needs high quality fics, they're isn't a whole lot of them. This chapter is good its good to get a break from heavier plot points and do much lighter ones, and I would suggest do at least two more like this, one should definitely include Rin meeting the two clock tower mages that come every once in awhile.
8/19/2011 c6 12whodidthewhatnow
Par for the course actually, considering the wacky hijinks that happens in between all the blood, gore and despair of Nasu works.

That, and the food porn. Never forget the food porn.
8/19/2011 c6 guy
classic machi- I mean classic rin.
8/19/2011 c6 second-stooge
WOOHOO! UPDATE! first of all, awesome chapeter, you never cease to have a decent amount of humer in them XD. Secondly, Nice way to introduce Rin. And third, since they will have more time to know eachother, things will either be easier allying themsefs or harder when the war comes, having to fight/kill eachother
8/19/2011 c6 origin of summoners
im surprised that scab never used that bokken would scare the hell of a lot of people.
8/19/2011 c6 Lex Luthor's Toupee
Make Hercules and Lancer switch places. Hercules as Lancer gains access to all of his Noble Phantasms and previous tactical ability. Cu Chulainn as Berserker gains a huge stat boost and loses a Noble Phantasm that never killed anybody, ever. It makes two of the more ineffectual servants much more powerful.
8/19/2011 c6 22ndsly
This is the FS/N fic ive been looking for.

Put as many chapters as you want in, let the plot elements simmer awhile. Done right, it just makes the story better.

more when you can
8/19/2011 c6 10BF110C4
Poor, poor Shirou, no matter what dimension, no matter which level of education nor the fact that he finally learned to seek the help of other during times of conflict he cannot escape the grasp of both his femmes fatales, Rin and Fuji-nee, both of them who just abuse of the goodness of his heart.

And I guess that until the next holiday in England Rin is going to be holding Shirou from a very short and painfull leash.

Thanks for the chapter, quite fun and light-hearted.
8/19/2011 c6 FateBurn
great chapter really liked how Shirou meet Rin, can´t wait to see the two sisters meet through thier friendship with Shirou, and also for the war to start and see what masters and servant you change and for whom, althoug I realy hope you don´t change the more notable ones(specaly Saber, Archer and Raider). Other than that please update again soon.
8/19/2011 c6 SilverIceRing
Wow... I knew Rin could be manipulative, but this is just being a bitch... hope things go better later on. Though the impression she has left on me this chapter is sure going to make things hard. Still, despite such a frustrating end, I really enjoyed this chapter. A bit different than usual, but considering that you watched the "Carnival", I can't blame ya.

Though I can envy you (I want to watch it too!)

Keep up the fast updates!
8/19/2011 c6 HolyKnight5
This its going to end on an orgy years later, no?
8/19/2011 c6 Calpeto9
Nice chapter.

Liked both the interactions and the part where Shirou used Structural Analysis; somehow, I got caught up into a Sherlock Holmes vibe.
8/19/2011 c6 1chaosglory626
I'm actually on a Fate/Stay Night kick right now and you have just added fuel to the fire. The opening of this chapter had me chuckling "This oughta be good." FEAR TORASHINAI! And then there's Rin blackmailing herself into a friendship. Soon she'll be tsundere-ing all over the place. Though I have to say I can't wait to see what you do with/to Shinji. One fic I read had him meet Shirou at a younger age and he grew up to be less of a dick, or you could keep him as an asshole and have him get owned later. You know what you should totally do later on in this story, have omakes with the Oogakari. Hilariously awesome without messing up your plot.
8/19/2011 c6 2bobcat86
thank goodness for your timely update! this is like a fanfic version of gae bolg! the reader is hooked and then the story is written. my biggest question right now is will shirou learn to trace tora-shinai? how will current events shape up shirou and rin's relationship? tsun-tsun, or dere-dere? Can't wait for the next chapter for much longer so please hurry.

Have a nice day!

Eric Barefoot
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