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8/10/2012 c1 FlameFrost101
Love it soooooo much! Zanna is my fave character, and this is just like her!
8/8/2011 c1 3sma erDnIy lnO
wow hankat ive never read the series but know i wanna you did great girl!

~Pegasus aka Lex ;)
7/31/2011 c1 Dragonfly999
Nice. I like it very much. Whether it was intentional or not, I like the way Zanna's third-person reflection upon David breaks sometimes and she ends up talking as if directly to him. You wrote this well, I think. The fic blends with the underlying song - the words mould with each other and it works nicely. The sentence after "That I want it this way" is a little bit too long (in my opinion, which probably isn't that great...) but the only thing I would leave out about it would be the "one of the nine" and "the cast out Fain's shell", or maybe cut all the descriptions up into a few different sentences. Other than that, I have no somewhat negative comments - this songfic is superb and written with passion. B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
7/23/2011 c1 2Sky- XD
cool

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