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for 20 Sentences: Roy Mustang

7/8/2012 c1 ZodiacDOG101
Love it
6/1/2012 c1 66Military Mechanic
oh wow, this was sooo cool! i love doing stories like this - where everything has a limit and a prompt to go with it, and the inspiration must be drawn from the smallest of things. i, personally, think that you did a fantastic job with this! i couldn't spot any mistakes what so ever.

i think that my favorite one would be TRAP. it was just...it was really touching and i think that it really drew you into Roy's character. not only is it a symbolic piece, as he has nicknamed all of his subordinates after pieces used in chess, but it touched his personality as well. frankly, Roy is more concerned about his friends then he is his own well being - and is more often than not willing to sacrifice himself for them.

i also just adored AGAIN. it wasn't as dark as some of the others here, which i loved for their darkness, but it was beyond melancholy. how something so simple can begin to mean so much...just a wonderful choice of wording on your part, m'dear.
7/27/2011 c1 4AmberSweetOnline
Aww. I like it. :)

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