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9/11/2017 c30 Mallon Schwarz
I desperately want this to be finished. I love it.

6/19/2016 c10 3Bloody Love
Loving the rewrite so far. I've missed reading Rei/Heero. Trying to finish the rest of the story as fast as I can.
8/26/2014 c30 Jokolyn
More please MK :(
7/31/2013 c30 11NoLongerWriting-AbandonedAccou
Holy crap I've been gone too long! This already has 30 chapters! SO AWESOME!

I need to read your DBZ/SM fics and I'll get to them in time, I'm a slow reader and I have to work and finish my stories too!


I can't wait to read that one too! YEY! THANK YOU!
1/22/2013 c30 amateurAstronomy
i suggest you finish this story already. you been writing this for more than 10 years now. despite the many reviews, i don't get why only few fave this. but at least there are... but i really think you should finished this up already.
1/15/2013 c30 14MinakoTrickster
Yay! Finally get to see the chapter in whole!

Trowa...I love you. I do. But you deserve this.. -slaps him after putting an immovable dodge, block spell on me so he gets slapped no matter what-

And Quatre...-slaps with the same slap- Thats for spreading the rumor along further without asking Mina.

And yay! Girl power bishes.

Haha, Duo got mama S to agree. Honestly, love the mama...she's just very strict.

Can't wait to see more...a lot less than I had planned to say last night, but I'm getting it in. :D
10/8/2012 c29 Dragon Nyx Rantiel
Once again I was so captivated by your story that I forgot to review after each chapter. This is such a great story. I love the way that you have kept the girls with their powers but making it so they don't have to transform to se them. You have paired the gundam pilots perfectly with the scouts. Please update again soon I love this story.
8/13/2012 c29 Guest
Some how I managed to miss not one but two updates to this story...lol Yup I'm awesome. lol

But no in all seriousness, as usual you bring forth such stunning chapters. They are always such fun to read and leave me anticipating the next chapter. Keep it up! :)
8/10/2012 c7 1sunniedelight
"A single eyebrow shot in the air. "Bitch, don't make me prove you wrong.""
Bwuahahaha you had me cracking up at the last part, eee, completly loving falling in love with this story all over again. Thank you!
8/10/2012 c4 sunniedelight
Ohhh how I adore the scene when they're in bed! 3 If I was Rei, oh my I could not have left that bed ;P
8/10/2012 c1 sunniedelight
I'm too excited to see this being revised and worked on once again! I read this years ago when I was babeof01and05trunks and absolutely loved it, so you can't imagine my joy now rereading it even if I'm 10 years older now, hehe :D amazing first chapter, it's been so long that parts will still be a surprise, well whatever you don't change. Yay!
8/6/2012 c29 Shynii
(Eeep – sorry for the length of this review! My fingers couldn't stop typing!)

You know, I'm gonna be honest - Rei/Heero is not my favorite couple in the world (I honestly think Relena was the perfect girl for Heero, and my all time favorite GWSM pairing is Rei/Trowa) but I LOVE how you write and it makes even usually intolerable things not only tolerable, but completely enjoyable! I bet you could write about paint drying and make it sound like poetry. Though I do have to say, I'm loving the Wufei and Ami stuff going on, very very cute (convincingly cute for a man whose sole mission seems to be anti-cute or anything related to femininity/girlyness/weakness). In any case, I'm glad this section of is coming back to life, and not the sad kind of zombie-life that is comprised of really bad songfics and those of the Mary Sue variety.

One thing. I know this is something I usually notice in romantically charged fics - I understand the drama here lies outside the romantic couplings, but I don't think each character needs to be paired up with someone else in the group. Nor should any of the relationships last. In fact, I feel it would be much more real to have a couple that really seemed to have chemistry fizzle out, you know after that lusty first couple days or weeks. I know that brings a whole other level of drama within the group (I think of co-ed dormitories in college or office romances that then lead to awkward moments when the former couples constantly have to see each other, haha, humorous if you're not the involved party), but it definitely happens a lot in real life and I feel is underrepresented in fiction. I guess that if I was writing this, however, and there was a group of hardcore, lets say, Usa/Duo shippers and I killed off their relationship in two chapters I'd probably get a lot of flame reviews and lose those (albeit flighty) readers. Sigh, fanfiction is a tricky thing. But, even though I love love love the Wufei/Ami thing going on, I feel like maybe you're setting yourself up for something with them? The way you worded their encounter in the last chapter:
“That shyness was just one of the things about her that was ridiculously attractive; he was determined to enjoy it as long as possible before it faded due to familiarity.”
I know that's just one line out of many, but it's probably what got my mind churning. Real people make mistakes and some people go out with a ton of different people before finding “the one.” I'd love happily ever afters for all of them, but that ain't life. Not that giant mechanized robots and girls with superpowers are part of what we call life either... but I digress.

This comment is already too long. Maybe I should take a crack at writing a fanfic. Nah, I don't have the commitment you do. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great writing and you can expect more reviews from me :)
8/5/2012 c29 14MinakoTrickster
I hear ya hun. Seems people went quiet on review, but then, it's getting to be that time of the year where things speed up, even life.

I saw you called my phone, but I wasn't able to get to it. Just been running around. I start classes next week and it'll be a bish to get everything done.

And you so added some stuff. I was rolling with laughter at some parts and rooting for Duo entirely throughout it. XD

What can I say? You make me love that coupling like the ten hottest men crowding on my bed to give me attention. ;)

o.o Can I have Vegeta for a moment?! Or like a month? . I promise he'll return somewhat intact. XD

I have to go read Stranger here soon. I've been putting it off when I just jump on at random. It's nearly five am here now and I have to sleep!

Not to mention... I haven't even started my next chapter. Well, I did. But then I trashed it like two pages in because I didn't like it.

Anywho! -grabs the ficcy and huggles it- I WANT MORE! AND YES I'M SCREAMING LIKE A TWO YEAR OLD WHO WANTS THE COOL FIC! XD Keep it up, dear!
8/4/2012 c29 18JPandS
Your writing is so addicting. Seriously!

Anyhow, being able to see Duo and Usa together was so sweet and intriguing. I laughed so hard when they went to check out the barn haha. Those two playing detective somehow makes me smile. :) Also, it was so interesting to see them get to know each other and Duo is so chivalrous not to take advantage of that situation.

I really do love the way you portray him. He is so lovable and still himself! Which I love entirely! He has easily grown to be one of my favorites XD along with Wufei!

Oh, and before I forget, I love the interaction between Rei, Duo and Wufei. That was highly entertaining and so playful! I love the relationship those three have together plus reading about how neither Wufei nor Ami had gotten sleep made me snicker haha. Love those two!

Now, the ending gets me a bit nervous. Then again, I'm always apprehensive when the antagonist is mentioned. I do wonder what plan they'll come up with and how it'll play out in the future. As always, this was an awesome update! I cannot wait to read more!
8/1/2012 c29 reina
shucks, i accidentally hit the post review button since i'm reading on the phone but i was about to say that i wonder about relena. it's not that i miss her, jus curious though.
i'll wait patiently for the next update
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