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3/14/2019 c9 Guest
No it was haa zasu
4/6/2014 c1 8DonnaSmith
I like the way you write.
7/5/2012 c11 2wasa11030
[rage face] fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
7/4/2012 c5 wasa11030
awsome knew it

long live the king unless he is called scar
7/4/2012 c4 wasa11030
dun-dun-duuuuuuun
7/4/2012 c1 wasa11030
scar is grumpy he needs a hobby like trying to be happy. -}
also i do not get why muffy is so like anikan skywalker.
3/28/2012 c1 11ThatLazyBch
Cool.
3/20/2012 c5 Dr.Laundry
Ok I am going to give my 100 percent honest opnion. I think you went to fast with the Nala, Simba relationship. You did it all too quickly. This chapter was bit repetitive to other stories I read however there is something good about it and that is making Tama an interesting character. I have no clue where she is from but I assume its one of the books or comics I never bothered reading. I know thats where Kopa came from. But the point is I read many stories here with Tama as a character and in most situations Tama is pretty much the worst character. You managed to make her more interesting and only one other person did that with there story in my opnion. From what i read atleast. Nice job and I will continue to read
3/20/2012 c4 Dr.Laundry
I personally don't understand why so many people think Simba and Nala liked each other that way as cubs. But oh well. Over all this story has been good from what I read. Its way different from the original plot so its not repetitive. So far so good
3/8/2012 c19 72Vitani825
This was an excellent chapter. Its kinda hard for me to write wedding chapters in stories since I don't get practice at it. Do you have any ideas on how to incorporate a wedding in a story? By the way, its also kinda hard to write my own version of The Lion King 1 and 2 when I don't want to get completely off topic. Do you have any ideas for filler chapters so the story will be longer than each of the movies were?
2/7/2012 c1 Dr.Laundry
Well I finally decided to read the first chapter and i was impressed with it. You did a very nice job making changes to the story. I also like how you include zira since most people are like " where was she in the first movie?"
12/15/2011 c19 178Lavenderpaw
oh god, cute enough! I love Bluey. over all it was a fun read.

ttyl for now. :)
12/10/2011 c7 Lavenderpaw
not bad, remember your punctuation. periods, exclamation marks, etc. :)
12/8/2011 c5 Lavenderpaw
tama's mean... :/
12/4/2011 c2 Lavenderpaw
huh, how could Malka a cub take on Mufasa?
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