5/4/2012 c2 2liltinglullaby
This kind of broke my heart.
It's a well written piece that captures the emotions perfectly, and the ending is completely perfect.
This kind of broke my heart.
It's a well written piece that captures the emotions perfectly, and the ending is completely perfect.
12/28/2011 c2 5glitters and gold
This is... heartbreaking. Tragic. And although I don't agree with Annabeth, I see where she's coming from. It's beautifully written. Nice job.
This is... heartbreaking. Tragic. And although I don't agree with Annabeth, I see where she's coming from. It's beautifully written. Nice job.
12/28/2011 c2 2iluvcoffee123
I feel so bad for Annabeth. This is one of my favorite reunion stories that I've read. Also, just to let you know, another author reposted this story. They made it clear that it wasn't theirs and belonged to you, but if soeone reviews it would be for that post of this, not the original.
I feel so bad for Annabeth. This is one of my favorite reunion stories that I've read. Also, just to let you know, another author reposted this story. They made it clear that it wasn't theirs and belonged to you, but if soeone reviews it would be for that post of this, not the original.
12/19/2011 c1 16sofagogo
Just gonna review this part too. I am dying inside in a good way. This is one of the best fics I've ever read. Ohmygod. Seriously, keep writing this. I found this on burdge's blog and ohmygod. ohmygod. ohmygod. Pleaseee keep writing. I know it's only supposed to be a oneshot, but I need it to go onnn!
Just gonna review this part too. I am dying inside in a good way. This is one of the best fics I've ever read. Ohmygod. Seriously, keep writing this. I found this on burdge's blog and ohmygod. ohmygod. ohmygod. Pleaseee keep writing. I know it's only supposed to be a oneshot, but I need it to go onnn!
12/18/2011 c2 sofagogo
OH MY GOD. That is all I can say. I am about to cry. Beautiful. So beautiful. Please write more. Please.
OH MY GOD. That is all I can say. I am about to cry. Beautiful. So beautiful. Please write more. Please.
10/20/2011 c2 4mabsootmonster
Found this when Burdge praised your story on her tumblr, and I must agree, it's gorgeous. Simply beautiful...
Found this when Burdge praised your story on her tumblr, and I must agree, it's gorgeous. Simply beautiful...
8/4/2011 c2 alainn belle
okay, this isnt your fault, but i dont know where to say it. **i /hate/ how rick riordan made percy lose his memories. its so, so sad and stupid. we don't care about jason grace, we dont have five books of history with him.** okay. done. now about your story: the line breaks are a little confusing, it's true. but it was well done and sad. keep updating.
okay, this isnt your fault, but i dont know where to say it. **i /hate/ how rick riordan made percy lose his memories. its so, so sad and stupid. we don't care about jason grace, we dont have five books of history with him.** okay. done. now about your story: the line breaks are a little confusing, it's true. but it was well done and sad. keep updating.
8/1/2011 c2 mac92795
omg! i saw ur story on Brigid's Tumbler after i saw her drawing and i was liek O_O AHHH if burdge likes it then i would! she said that u had gotten annabeth's character down really well and tust me! ive read so many fanficions on here where the characters are portrayed nothhhiinnggg like the real thing BUT...YOU PORTRAYED THEM PERFECTLY! ahhh omg this story is like THEEE best percabeth son of neptune story ive read! u r very talented! and so is burdge-bug lol im soo not surprised you got inspired and wrote a whole STORY just from one of her pictures! she is an amazing artist who can touch the hearts of all with just one picture and your story did that for me as well! EXCELENT JOB! ;D
omg! i saw ur story on Brigid's Tumbler after i saw her drawing and i was liek O_O AHHH if burdge likes it then i would! she said that u had gotten annabeth's character down really well and tust me! ive read so many fanficions on here where the characters are portrayed nothhhiinnggg like the real thing BUT...YOU PORTRAYED THEM PERFECTLY! ahhh omg this story is like THEEE best percabeth son of neptune story ive read! u r very talented! and so is burdge-bug lol im soo not surprised you got inspired and wrote a whole STORY just from one of her pictures! she is an amazing artist who can touch the hearts of all with just one picture and your story did that for me as well! EXCELENT JOB! ;D
7/31/2011 c2 7AnEarthlyKnight
oh my goodness oh my goodness OH MY GOODNESS.
You, ma'am, are an amazing writer. This is seriously tear-jerking, and if Riordan trolls us and does anything of this sort in SoN, I WILL DIE. I love this couple too damn much!
But you wrote this fic to perfection (I'm a lover of angst, it's true). I really loved the changing perspectives, and how their thoughts could match up in many ways.
I love this so much! :D Burdge's drawing was also amazing, so I can see where the inspiration came from. But great work!
oh my goodness oh my goodness OH MY GOODNESS.
You, ma'am, are an amazing writer. This is seriously tear-jerking, and if Riordan trolls us and does anything of this sort in SoN, I WILL DIE. I love this couple too damn much!
But you wrote this fic to perfection (I'm a lover of angst, it's true). I really loved the changing perspectives, and how their thoughts could match up in many ways.
I love this so much! :D Burdge's drawing was also amazing, so I can see where the inspiration came from. But great work!
7/30/2011 c2 12Emothgurl
holy crap. :(
love it.
hopefully, though, rick riordan will not make it this painful for me...
holy crap. :(
love it.
hopefully, though, rick riordan will not make it this painful for me...
7/29/2011 c2 1xXkimiko3Xx
Ohmigoodness. I had seen the picture described before I read this - I love Burdge. It was actually from her tumblr that I found this. I love fan fics, especially short one-shots.
But this one, I can't even...
It's like you watch movies all your life and you love them, and some really are sad or heart wrenching, and you're like 'These are wonderful'.
And then you watch The Notebook.
And you can't stop crying. It's such a beautiful movie and it evokes so many emotions, and by far it's one of the best movies you've ever seen.
This is The Notebook of all short one-shot fanfictions. You could probably even just say The Notebook of ALL fanfictions. Not even just Percy Jackson ones. In fact, this is the first Percy Jackson fanfic I've read. And I was crying nearly at the beginning. And it wasn't one of those cries that sting your eyes and then five minutes later tears roll, it's the kind that just spill endlessly and effortlessly. The kind that only hard-core emotions can make.
You captured the characters PERFECTLY. Anyone who reads this, even if they don't like fanfics, will love it.
Thank you, for writing this and sharing it with the world. I have been ... blessed is the only word I can come up with, by reading this story.
Sincerly,
Hannah
Ohmigoodness. I had seen the picture described before I read this - I love Burdge. It was actually from her tumblr that I found this. I love fan fics, especially short one-shots.
But this one, I can't even...
It's like you watch movies all your life and you love them, and some really are sad or heart wrenching, and you're like 'These are wonderful'.
And then you watch The Notebook.
And you can't stop crying. It's such a beautiful movie and it evokes so many emotions, and by far it's one of the best movies you've ever seen.
This is The Notebook of all short one-shot fanfictions. You could probably even just say The Notebook of ALL fanfictions. Not even just Percy Jackson ones. In fact, this is the first Percy Jackson fanfic I've read. And I was crying nearly at the beginning. And it wasn't one of those cries that sting your eyes and then five minutes later tears roll, it's the kind that just spill endlessly and effortlessly. The kind that only hard-core emotions can make.
You captured the characters PERFECTLY. Anyone who reads this, even if they don't like fanfics, will love it.
Thank you, for writing this and sharing it with the world. I have been ... blessed is the only word I can come up with, by reading this story.
Sincerly,
Hannah