for Deep Conversations with Angela Martin9/10/2011 c1 
4nrfan
lovely story. this is exactly how i imagine angela would react to finding out about the Senator. hurt and angry on the outside, yet clearly in pain and vulnerable on the inside, which shows when she kind of seeks out oscar but then forces herself to hold back at first. perfect characterization, great dialogue.
"No, it won't be difficult for him. I clearly have it worse – he gets to go off gallivanting with his communication manager Brokeback Mountain style, and all the while he just leaves me and our relationship behind. So if anybody deserves a pity party here, it's me."
fave line. so angela. self-centered and spiteful, yet she's clearly heartbroken. and the angela/oscar interactions were just perfect and so realistic. great job. i would LOVE to see a continuation of this too if you're up for it. :)
4nrfanlovely story. this is exactly how i imagine angela would react to finding out about the Senator. hurt and angry on the outside, yet clearly in pain and vulnerable on the inside, which shows when she kind of seeks out oscar but then forces herself to hold back at first. perfect characterization, great dialogue.
"No, it won't be difficult for him. I clearly have it worse – he gets to go off gallivanting with his communication manager Brokeback Mountain style, and all the while he just leaves me and our relationship behind. So if anybody deserves a pity party here, it's me."
fave line. so angela. self-centered and spiteful, yet she's clearly heartbroken. and the angela/oscar interactions were just perfect and so realistic. great job. i would LOVE to see a continuation of this too if you're up for it. :)
8/1/2011 c1 fredrickshollowtree
now that seemed real!
now that seemed real!
7/31/2011 c1 officefreak
Great story!
Great story!
7/31/2011 c1 gleelover358
Sick & twisted in its own discreet way...just the way I like it! If you're open for continuation, this you should certainly consider ;)
Sick & twisted in its own discreet way...just the way I like it! If you're open for continuation, this you should certainly consider ;)
7/31/2011 c1 elephantsasbigaswhales
Wow! I'm really surprised by how much you made me visualize this & anticipate it. This is awesome. The characters are spot on & I can actually feel the tension between Angela & Oscar. I wish you would of continued you this though. I love it. Bravo!
Wow! I'm really surprised by how much you made me visualize this & anticipate it. This is awesome. The characters are spot on & I can actually feel the tension between Angela & Oscar. I wish you would of continued you this though. I love it. Bravo!
7/29/2011 c1 JS
Here's some M you characterized the accountants really well, particularly Kevin. I had a real easy time seeing this in my mind, good short story.
Here's some M you characterized the accountants really well, particularly Kevin. I had a real easy time seeing this in my mind, good short story.