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5/28/2015 c8 6Primus2021
Great fic. Loved it.
As for a sequel to this fic, go in order,
The rest of mmpr with the eggs hatching for Rocky Brown Raptor Ranger, Adam the Purple Stegosaurus Ranger, Aisha the Orange Ankylosaurus Ranger, and David Trueheart becoming the White Titanus Ranger.
Thunder Rangers, Tommy Green European Dragon, Kim Pink Phoenix, Jason Red Chinese Dragon, Zack Black Lion, Billy Blue Pegasus, Trini Yellow Kiren, Rocky Brown Tor Ranger, Adam the Purple Gryphon Ranger, Aisha the Orange Umicorn Ranger, and David White Tiger Ranger.
ninjetti Rangers Pheados version, add Ninjor later, Tommy Green-White Falcon, Kim Pink Crane, Jason Red Ape, Zack Black Frog, Billy Blue Wolf, Trini Yellow Bear, Rocky Brown Whale Ranger, Adam the Purple Dear Ranger, Aisha the Orange Cheetah Ranger, and David the White-Green Bat Ranger.
Then Zeo with Kat and Tanya. then turbo With Justin And the Others
Great fic. Loved it.
As for a sequel to this fic, go in order,
The rest of mmpr with the eggs hatching for Rocky Brown Raptor Ranger, Adam the Purple Stegosaurus Ranger, Aisha the Orange Ankylosaurus Ranger, and David Trueheart becoming the White Titanus Ranger.
Thunder Rangers, Tommy Green European Dragon, Kim Pink Phoenix, Jason Red Chinese Dragon, Zack Black Lion, Billy Blue Pegasus, Trini Yellow Kiren, Rocky Brown Tor Ranger, Adam the Purple Gryphon Ranger, Aisha the Orange Umicorn Ranger, and David White Tiger Ranger.
ninjetti Rangers Pheados version, add Ninjor later, Tommy Green-White Falcon, Kim Pink Crane, Jason Red Ape, Zack Black Frog, Billy Blue Wolf, Trini Yellow Bear, Rocky Brown Whale Ranger, Adam the Purple Dear Ranger, Aisha the Orange Cheetah Ranger, and David the White-Green Bat Ranger.
Then Zeo with Kat and Tanya. then turbo With Justin And the Others
9/19/2014 c8 Golden Zero16
Wow, I love your work. This story, along with your Zelda story is well written. I'm definitely favoriting you!
Wow, I love your work. This story, along with your Zelda story is well written. I'm definitely favoriting you!
4/7/2013 c8 21Psycho Tangerine
Your writing skills are excellent. I love the fact that you used footnotes in this story. Too often I come upon 'stories' where all the writer does is rewrite what happened in the show, with perhaps adding another character into it, but nothing original. You, on the other hand, took the original story of how Tommy became the Green Ranger and added enough changes and twists (Tommy's parentage and messed up memories) to make it interesting and in some parts quite original. I really liked that the Zords were sentient in this. I would've loved to have seen the other Zords connect to their Rangers as well.
I have read stories where Tommy and Kim are together because the falcon and crane are together, but this is the first time I've seen it done with the dragon and pterodactyl. (But how did those two get 'together' since they are different? When their eggs hatch will their offspring be half dragon and half pterodactyl?)
Your writing skills are excellent. I love the fact that you used footnotes in this story. Too often I come upon 'stories' where all the writer does is rewrite what happened in the show, with perhaps adding another character into it, but nothing original. You, on the other hand, took the original story of how Tommy became the Green Ranger and added enough changes and twists (Tommy's parentage and messed up memories) to make it interesting and in some parts quite original. I really liked that the Zords were sentient in this. I would've loved to have seen the other Zords connect to their Rangers as well.
I have read stories where Tommy and Kim are together because the falcon and crane are together, but this is the first time I've seen it done with the dragon and pterodactyl. (But how did those two get 'together' since they are different? When their eggs hatch will their offspring be half dragon and half pterodactyl?)
11/17/2012 c3 6Primus2021
I would have either had Rita tell Tommy that "she only knew who the Red, Blue, and Black Rangers were."
...or...
Tell him that "she 'Currently' doesn't know any their true Identities." (this one would have been easier to deal with).
I would have either had Rita tell Tommy that "she only knew who the Red, Blue, and Black Rangers were."
...or...
Tell him that "she 'Currently' doesn't know any their true Identities." (this one would have been easier to deal with).
9/19/2012 c8 Sarah Zitter
I love this story. You did anwesome job on this story and I am happy that Tommy and Kim got married and had kids. I think Tommy and Kim's kids should be the next power rangers in the sequel please.
I love this story. You did anwesome job on this story and I am happy that Tommy and Kim got married and had kids. I think Tommy and Kim's kids should be the next power rangers in the sequel please.
8/20/2012 c8 1Hopeful Sole
This Was So Good I Loved It So Much and Tommy and Kimberly They are My Favorite I Love Them I Really Can't Wait For a Sequel Love This
This Was So Good I Loved It So Much and Tommy and Kimberly They are My Favorite I Love Them I Really Can't Wait For a Sequel Love This
12/18/2011 c8 storyteller1333
great story here, and i agree with you, thats how the powers soulda of been, or some where close to that ^^
as for the next chapter of the series, i thing going in cronological order would be best, that or how ever you want to write it is fine by me to :)
gl with the series ;0
jest one question tho, do the others(jason trini billy and zack) fully bond with there zords eventualy
great story here, and i agree with you, thats how the powers soulda of been, or some where close to that ^^
as for the next chapter of the series, i thing going in cronological order would be best, that or how ever you want to write it is fine by me to :)
gl with the series ;0
jest one question tho, do the others(jason trini billy and zack) fully bond with there zords eventualy
11/10/2011 c8 RKF22
great story and i would say going in order anyway great story cant wait for the sequel keep up the great work
great story and i would say going in order anyway great story cant wait for the sequel keep up the great work