for Kakashi's Advice!5/2/2015 c1 Guest
Lol where's the tape rofl
Lol where's the tape rofl
9/18/2012 c1 unsatisfied
so ,you call my stories dirty for using words yo udon't like? Well, I don't like this. it's disgusting. I mena "He licked his cock like a lollipop" Too much information.
You wrote this estory when you were 15? You must be a dirty slut to know so much about it. Plus, you must have oral sex experience for writing about how his dick was sucked.
Fucking disgusting.
so ,you call my stories dirty for using words yo udon't like? Well, I don't like this. it's disgusting. I mena "He licked his cock like a lollipop" Too much information.
You wrote this estory when you were 15? You must be a dirty slut to know so much about it. Plus, you must have oral sex experience for writing about how his dick was sucked.
Fucking disgusting.
8/11/2012 c1 
41C.Waif
Why would you make Naruto dirty by making him have a hard on? Disgusting language also.
41C.WaifWhy would you make Naruto dirty by making him have a hard on? Disgusting language also.
8/10/2011 c1 31do-the-unthinkable
Great Fic! It defiantly gives me an Idea for my next prompt! :)
-DTU
31do-the-unthinkableGreat Fic! It defiantly gives me an Idea for my next prompt! :)
-DTU
8/2/2011 c1 1Rii-Chan.xx
Despite our conversation earlier i'm gunna be nice and review...
I FREAKIN LOVED IT AHHHHHH! 3
Love ya dobe xx
p.s come see smurfs with me kay and dani !
1Rii-Chan.xxDespite our conversation earlier i'm gunna be nice and review...
I FREAKIN LOVED IT AHHHHHH! 3
Love ya dobe xx
p.s come see smurfs with me kay and dani !
7/30/2011 c1 8Jaybee4
I love it ^^ it was, like, two lemons in one. And you did a great job writing it, I saw no mistakes (or maybe i just scanned over them for being too intrigued by the story haha) Great job!
And for Sha-Chan, happy bleated birthday =3
8Jaybee4I love it ^^ it was, like, two lemons in one. And you did a great job writing it, I saw no mistakes (or maybe i just scanned over them for being too intrigued by the story haha) Great job!
And for Sha-Chan, happy bleated birthday =3
7/29/2011 c1 11OriginalPsyche
I loved this! And when I read Sasuke's story, I couldn't help laughing XD the fact that it was SASUKE'S story of all people's just really got me XD Anywho, great lemon
11OriginalPsycheI loved this! And when I read Sasuke's story, I couldn't help laughing XD the fact that it was SASUKE'S story of all people's just really got me XD Anywho, great lemon
7/29/2011 c1 10Kkas
...WHERE'S MY GODDAMN TAPE! XD Cheh. Pushing me into the bushes..
Nono, but seriously. I had about 40 different reactions to this...Snorting at the personal jokes..(You and the damn afterglow!) Awwing at the sasunaru, getting excited at our cameo...gasping and whining at the part where they had an argument, giggling behind my hand at some scenes, nosebleeding at others...ect. And this is uber(yes, I said it. don't judge me) cool, considering it was done in a really short amount of time to get it to me. ^^ And if you ever do a cameo again, I wanna be in it! XD Oh, and also, now I owe you a response to this for your birthday!(mwahaha, you have to wait that long! :D)
Thank you so much for my yummy, funny, bloody birthday present! Love you Uchi chan! ^^ 3
.Ookami~Sha~Sasu-chan. x
10Kkas...WHERE'S MY GODDAMN TAPE! XD Cheh. Pushing me into the bushes..
Nono, but seriously. I had about 40 different reactions to this...Snorting at the personal jokes..(You and the damn afterglow!) Awwing at the sasunaru, getting excited at our cameo...gasping and whining at the part where they had an argument, giggling behind my hand at some scenes, nosebleeding at others...ect. And this is uber(yes, I said it. don't judge me) cool, considering it was done in a really short amount of time to get it to me. ^^ And if you ever do a cameo again, I wanna be in it! XD Oh, and also, now I owe you a response to this for your birthday!(mwahaha, you have to wait that long! :D)
Thank you so much for my yummy, funny, bloody birthday present! Love you Uchi chan! ^^ 3
.Ookami~Sha~Sasu-chan. x