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4/6/2012 c6 CCBTH
Like this so far...although i dont know why bella would have to choose... and i hate bree... so meh...less drama more hotness!
4/2/2012 c6 LuvnmyEdward
Please please you have to update this story. I don't think I got to review this chapter. Sorry I'm so late doing it. I have been looking to see if you updated almost everyday. I finally went looking for your story and found it to tell you to update it. The little competition when Edward and Jacob were kissing Bella was good but I was hoping Edward and Jacob would kiss to. Lol. I know they are just getting used to the idea of them sharing and being with Bella and I'm hoping that they do get to the stage where they kiss and have hot sex with Bella. Lol. Again please please update your story soon. I'll beg if I have to but it won't be pretty. Lol.
12/31/2011 c1 1tarapoynter13
I love your story!

I have never read a story with all three of them actually being together. I like how edward and jacob work together to make bella happy.

I cant wait for more!

xTara
12/27/2011 c6 5Tygee
I'll be honest, I think Billy's' "I'm not even going to ask" is my favorite line. This is an interesting storyline, although not at all plausible with Bella's original character. She isn't horny enough. I mean, she picked the vampire that practically won't kiss her over the werewolf that oozes sex. And she is way, way too whipped by Edward. Like a lost puppy. But I look forward to seeing where you go with it. It's bound to be hot, if nothing else :)
12/25/2011 c6 deannadawson
awww man this story is sooo goood! love love love it! i sure hope you update soon.
12/20/2011 c6 Mrsgee
Very nice! Shame they were interupted. Looking forward to Chapter 7.
12/20/2011 c6 5It's a Jacob Thing
dang...Billy! you leave it wanting more...
8/24/2011 c5 LuvnmyEdward
I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved the little celebration between Edward and Jacob because of the team work. Lol. That little scene was cute and I'm hoping the planting of the seed for something more to happen between Edward and Jacob. Lol. I'm seeing the equal time forming. So Bree is a Cullen now. It could be interesting to see what happens. Is this going to be a factor in keeping Bella more at home so both Edward and Jacob will spend time with her at her house? I can see it because Edward and Jacob won't want Bella hurt and Bree is just barely going to learn. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work because I would love to read more.
8/10/2011 c4 LuvnmyEdward
Me again. Lol. I loved this chapter because I haven't read the books, only watched the movie. It's good that Edward agreed with Jacob but Bella just seems a little more focused on Jacob. Loving that Edward and Jacob had each other's backs. A little hint of something later on. Lol. Can't wait for the next chapter, which now I know where to look. Lol
8/10/2011 c3 LuvnmyEdward
Sorry I'n barely reviewing now. I was still waiting in the Edward/Jacob section. Then it finally hit me to check Jacob/Bella. Lol. Thank you for mentioning me and anwering my questions. Loving that it will be all three together. I know you said they will get equal time but will it be like "okay I'm going to spend time with Edward now, so see you later Jacob", kind of thing? I'm hoping they all spend time figuring things out. I will definitely vote for Edward when the time comes. Lol. It only seems that things happen with Edward and Jacob as well because I think in a true threesome you can't help but fall in love or something happens or even both. Lol. So since your story is now Jacob/Bella, will Bella choose Jacob in the end? I want to ask, what about pregnancy? Is it something that might happen? I will review chapter 4 next. Lol.
8/9/2011 c1 6cutie09sofine
lol i was showing my bff the world of fanfiction n was telling her about lemon stories n how they sumtimes pop up outta nowhere so i went through twilight fanfics and your summary seemed like a good example so shes screaming for me to read it (OUTLOUD) and we are reading it we like this a whole lot and have read all the chapters posted we would like to say...keep it up for the "first" thing she screams JACOB and i whisper edward because i feel Jacob can do much better...but keep it up we love love love it
8/6/2011 c3 cutelilblonde1245
great story
8/4/2011 c3 DreamWishBelieve
Love it, need more lol! xxx
8/4/2011 c3 1Ms.TwiBlack
love the story always wanted it to go in this path, but hate the fact that she still wants to keep Edward
8/4/2011 c3 Mrsgee
Oooh, threesomes always fascinate me. I already know who I want to be first, but I'll wait until you poll to tell you. Looking forward to how things develop.
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