12/27/2017 c1 deletethisaccountffs
this made me squeal and make all sorts of weird noises. such an amazing writingI love how you fit Sam and Dean so perfectly into their character. ugh just amazing!

11/5/2011 c1 NyaleIsamba
Wow, this story is amazing! You capture who the characters are wonderfully. Good job! Going to go read your other story now. :D

10/10/2011 c1 6Viviane Renard
Another fantastic story! You get the chemistry between Sam and Dean so perfectly. The final sentence is so especially Dean:

If Sam could've seen Dean right at that moment, he would've seen him stiffen at the mention of Nebraska before smirking and taking the exit to head east through Iowa. "Sure thing, Sammy."

Dean does that all the time to Sam! Even the most recent Season, 7, when he's all "okay, Sam, you're right, let's leave that kitsune alone...oh wait, I'm going to kill her on my own." He'll agree with what Sam says, and then do the exact opposite because that's what his "big brother instincts" tell him to do. I love that you can capture the little details like that; that's what makes your story have such depth to their relationship.

8/7/2011 c1 4Aishiteru Koinu
I enjoyed reading this one-shot. Very creative, descriptive and memorable in many delicious ways.

8/1/2011 c1 2Luke's Momma
This is AWESOME! Your characterisation is pretty damn perfect and add that to some very hot sexin' *fans self* yep. AWESOME.

8/1/2011 c1 4AshStilinski24
Ok, I'm new to Supernatural. I'm all in the Criminal Minds, NCIS, house and such but I was doing my random You tube videos and I came up with a video of Supernatural where Dean and Sam were talking about fangirls and such, One of them questioned slash and he was like, "Us, together..together." "Eww thats sick, do they know we are brothers?" " Don't care...LOL and behold I read this amazing story!~

7/30/2011 c1 27darkforetold
First of all, let me just express how utterly proud of you I am. You have grown so much in your writing from the last story that I read and I'm incredibly impressed. I'm so very proud of you for writing such an incredible piece of fiction. This? was amazing. I loved it so much. It had me laughing out loud, feeling their pain, and reveling in their time together. I actually cheered when they started sexing. The characters were so freaking believable that.. I'm pretty much speechless. I could SEE them actually doing these things. Your dialogue is this side of amazing and it was almost as if I was reading an actual episode. Wow. I just.. there are absolutely no words to how much I loved this. I'm pretty stunned. True to the characters and exciting. You, my friend, have a hit on your hands. In my opinion, this was a monumental success. Bravo!

7/30/2011 c1 17SoulfulSam
Aww, babe, thanks so much for the shout-out! You are also an endless supply of inspiration for me and I love all the time we've spent talking shop about Supernatural. I have definitely included several details about our conversations over the boys into my stories and I know you're probably getting tired of hearing it, but I have to say again that I wouldn't still be writing fan fiction if it weren't for you.

Okay, chick-flick moment over, now on to your wonderful story:

I think my favorite lines of this entire story are:

Sam: "Open wide, Dean."

Dean: "Right here? I'm driving, man."

Sam: "It's just an M&M

Dean: "Oh. I don't know whether or not to be disappointed."

Hee, hee, that was great. Yeah, I could totally see that happening in my head. Although the way you wrote the whole thing I could totally see it all happening in my head. Your sex scene between these two was very hot, just like the one you wrote before. Sex anywhere near, in, beside, or on the Impala is always a nice treat. Although I was really hoping for a top!Sam, I was so not disappointed by this sex scene. Those two are just...wow. Any way they wanna have sex in just about any position is fine with me. And you write their love scenes so well. I have to admit that I couldn't really enjoy the scene in the beginning because Dean was just so endlessly frustrating in this story, though in his flat-out stubborn refusal to listen to Sam. And I was also expecting a bit more of a fight between the two of them before they got to the sex because it seemed to me that Sam would be more angry with Dean than he was. I mean, I know that he understands his brother, but just because he knows where he's coming from that's not gonna stop him from getting angry, and even them hitting each other once in a while. And I really thought that they were still in a middle of a fight that would make neither of them feel like having sex when it started. All the same though, by the end of the scene when Dean was screaming out, "I love you so much, Sammy!" I was melting into a puddle of goo in my chair. I just love it so much when Dean uses that word, especially since he rarely says it. I think that it was extra appropriate here though because between the worry he was feeling, the fight, and the sex, he just had to be overcome with emotions at that point. And then of course he's embarrassed about it later but with how much Sam liked hearing it and a little encouragement coming from him, he'll say it again. And yeah, the fact that Dean doesn't say it that much really showed the intimacy the two of them were sharing at that point in time and that made me melt as well.

But then in the end, Dean doesn't change! This is not only so frustrating that after I'm done writing this I'm gonna have to go lift weights to work out my aggressions, but it makes it feel like the story isn't really over. Is it? I mean, Dean's clearly still not gonna let Sam do anything and that's going to be endlessly frustrating for Sam. Even if he tries to be more sneaky about how he tries to protect Sam from himself, Sam's gonna see right through it and, rightfully, get pissed off. And if Sam wakes up while they're in Iowa or at least not in Nebraska it's going to end in another fight. I'm a little surprised that Dean would lie to Sam like that. Again, with how ridiculously stubborn he was, I'm not surprised he changed, but I am surprised that he lied. I really loved how you added in Dean's guilt over feeling like Sam's predicament was his fault, though. I hadn't really thought much about that, but you're right; with how focused Dean was on getting his brother back he didn't care much for Sam's safety or how poorly things were going to be fore him, and although I did see that before, I didn't see how Dean would eventually realize that himself and feel like he'd once again done something wrong. So if Sam's wall came down, it wouldn't just be Dean having to deal with that and live with a dead brother, if he was lucky; it would be him having to deal with the crushing weight of knowing that Sam was this way because he couldn't let him go, because he had his mutilated soul shoved back into his body, and because he was selfish. Nice characterization with that detail. I love how you get into the boys' heads like that and can pull out little gems that give us all a better understanding into their angsty, self-loathing heads.