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8/1/2011 c1 15SuilsSaifir
Suils here,

Very very nice. I smiled, smirked and giggled all the way through it. Only thing - a few errors, if I can point them out.

"but thick not se!"

"supposed to be apologizing too"

"shall I hail you cab?"

Sorry :X

More! More!

Cha xx
8/1/2011 c1 AmethystWings
Questionable elements aside, this was an interesting read. It is a rather different story to be sure, but the last line made me laugh. Well done.
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