8/3/2011 c1 esgdghjklgytsrjrtgJKjg
Good. Like the backstory. Where were the Greyfolk in this?

8/2/2011 c1 2Apple Jaxx
Interesting topic. Can't wait to see what happens next.

8/2/2011 c1 10SleepingOnStage
Oh me, oh my (I've - lost my homework...) sorry, I sing way too much... this was a nice post-final-stressful-dress-rehearsal wind down, I must say. Thanks for your perfect timing!

I think I remember reading the draft for this, and I am still impressed. Has it really been a year since you published? Strange my friend, strange...

Your welcome btw, for coaxing you out of hiding and all. I told you we had milk and cookies ;)

As for this, whilst my knowledge of IC is limited, I do like how you've kind recovered some of the history, and introduced the rest about the Elementals and the Deviants. Nice beginnings to central Deviant you mentioned, a little vague I guess, but it's the daughter you're more concerned about isn't it? I can't wait to see how she develops! More plot bunnies for us! Maybe, just to help, I should actually get back into the books (when I finish my other ones that is...)

Loved it, as always,

Me :D