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That was super funny XD
That was super funny XD
11/12/2014 c1 MLP4EVA
And then... the whole thing repeats itself
And then... the whole thing repeats itself
12/21/2011 c1 KungFuTruffle
I was trying to figure out if I found this to be more sweet or more funny.
And then Pinkie suggested getting stoned at the end, and I freakin' lost it. Funny it is! XD
Oh God, a high Pinkie... the world is going to implode.
I was trying to figure out if I found this to be more sweet or more funny.
And then Pinkie suggested getting stoned at the end, and I freakin' lost it. Funny it is! XD
Oh God, a high Pinkie... the world is going to implode.
10/9/2011 c1 
30Quasimagical
Hello. (: I don't know if you recall my name, but I'm the author of "Of Females and Feathers," that Lezzy Dash story. I know you alerted it, but I'm unsure if you enjoyed it or not. In any case, that's not why I'm here; I just felt like mentioning it so you'll know who I am.
I'm here because I stumbled upon a review you left for another story, and you mentioned one of your own stories, which peaked my curiosity. So I came to see what you'd written! And I decided to read this one.
So! On to my review.
First of all, I enjoyed this story a lot. Your writing is fantastic, and not a single pony was out of character. The idea in general of Pinkie's friends wanting to keep her away from alcohol is great in itself, too; I actually hate when people portray Pinkie as a clueless 12-year-old, so it was very refreshing to see her actually wanting alcohol, and having drunk it before. This IS the pony who made a joke about spiking drinks, after all. And tried to turn the Gala into a nightclub.
You've managed to keep Pinkie completely in character, while showing her not-so-innocent side as well, and for that, I salute you. Twice.
I enjoyed that Dash was asleep, simply because I totally agree with you that she wouldn't have a high tolerance for alcohol at all. And while I'd never thought of Applejack's tolerance before now, your story has completely given me the same views you have. Speaking of Applejack, I commend your handling of her accent: you did a great job, probably the best I've yet to see.
Rarity offering to be singled out as well was beyond sweet, and definitely showed her generous nature. I found it adorable when Pinkie snuggled up to her and she told her to stop. Lol. I think Rarity's sweet generosity here, and the little conversation Twilight & AJ had about Pinkie's frowning were my favorite parts of this story. Along with Dash's low tolerance for alcohol.
The whining was great, the dialogue was great, the characterization was great, and the resolution was great. I really enjoyed reading this! And now I'm going to fav it. (: Thanks for writing.
30QuasimagicalHello. (: I don't know if you recall my name, but I'm the author of "Of Females and Feathers," that Lezzy Dash story. I know you alerted it, but I'm unsure if you enjoyed it or not. In any case, that's not why I'm here; I just felt like mentioning it so you'll know who I am.
I'm here because I stumbled upon a review you left for another story, and you mentioned one of your own stories, which peaked my curiosity. So I came to see what you'd written! And I decided to read this one.
So! On to my review.
First of all, I enjoyed this story a lot. Your writing is fantastic, and not a single pony was out of character. The idea in general of Pinkie's friends wanting to keep her away from alcohol is great in itself, too; I actually hate when people portray Pinkie as a clueless 12-year-old, so it was very refreshing to see her actually wanting alcohol, and having drunk it before. This IS the pony who made a joke about spiking drinks, after all. And tried to turn the Gala into a nightclub.
You've managed to keep Pinkie completely in character, while showing her not-so-innocent side as well, and for that, I salute you. Twice.
I enjoyed that Dash was asleep, simply because I totally agree with you that she wouldn't have a high tolerance for alcohol at all. And while I'd never thought of Applejack's tolerance before now, your story has completely given me the same views you have. Speaking of Applejack, I commend your handling of her accent: you did a great job, probably the best I've yet to see.
Rarity offering to be singled out as well was beyond sweet, and definitely showed her generous nature. I found it adorable when Pinkie snuggled up to her and she told her to stop. Lol. I think Rarity's sweet generosity here, and the little conversation Twilight & AJ had about Pinkie's frowning were my favorite parts of this story. Along with Dash's low tolerance for alcohol.
The whining was great, the dialogue was great, the characterization was great, and the resolution was great. I really enjoyed reading this! And now I'm going to fav it. (: Thanks for writing.
8/20/2011 c1 6FieryFilly
I really enjoyed this story. Its always difficult to keep Drinkie Pie off the ale.
6FieryFillyI really enjoyed this story. Its always difficult to keep Drinkie Pie off the ale.
8/6/2011 c1 3Dutchess Of Moonbrooke
A rather enjoyable story!
I liked that you had Twilight bring out the 'book'
3Dutchess Of MoonbrookeA rather enjoyable story!
I liked that you had Twilight bring out the 'book'
8/5/2011 c1 Sythe1
Oh god, my sides..
This is so fucking funny, including the ganja piece. If I were allowed, I would give you a Comedy Award.
Oh god, my sides..
This is so fucking funny, including the ganja piece. If I were allowed, I would give you a Comedy Award.
8/5/2011 c1 Moog
Hilarious!
Hilarious!
8/4/2011 c1 PJRandall
A very cute story. I'll admit that I went into it somewhat apprehensively, as I've read some fics that start off similarly that I really disliked. However, it ended up being quite an enjoyable read, that was very true to the characters, aside from the ganja line. Definitely getting fav'd.
http:/bronies.memebase.com/2011/07/29/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-how-old-are-you-pinkie/
A very cute story. I'll admit that I went into it somewhat apprehensively, as I've read some fics that start off similarly that I really disliked. However, it ended up being quite an enjoyable read, that was very true to the characters, aside from the ganja line. Definitely getting fav'd.
http:/bronies.memebase.com/2011/07/29/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-brony-how-old-are-you-pinkie/
8/4/2011 c1 11l0x0r
This was quite a fun read. Although I might be prejudiced since it seemed to focus more on Rarity than most stories, and as well all know, Rarity is the best pony.
That being said, I thought you kept all the characters in character very well. Although I'm not certain Pinkie would enjoy a depressant like ganja too much.
I hope you continue writing, and look forward to more of your work.
11l0x0rThis was quite a fun read. Although I might be prejudiced since it seemed to focus more on Rarity than most stories, and as well all know, Rarity is the best pony.
That being said, I thought you kept all the characters in character very well. Although I'm not certain Pinkie would enjoy a depressant like ganja too much.
I hope you continue writing, and look forward to more of your work.
8/3/2011 c1 5Laurence Brown
A wonderful, light-hearted story that doesn't take itself too seriously, and doesn't ask the reader too either. I was smiling the whole way through. I liked the interaction between Rarity and Pinkie Pie, one of the combinations of the mane six we haven't had the chance to see an actual episode revolve around yet (hopefully season 2?)
Also, keep the ganja away from Big Mac, please. Poor guy is mellow enough already, I don't want to see him slip into a coma ;)
5Laurence BrownA wonderful, light-hearted story that doesn't take itself too seriously, and doesn't ask the reader too either. I was smiling the whole way through. I liked the interaction between Rarity and Pinkie Pie, one of the combinations of the mane six we haven't had the chance to see an actual episode revolve around yet (hopefully season 2?)
Also, keep the ganja away from Big Mac, please. Poor guy is mellow enough already, I don't want to see him slip into a coma ;)