for A Dragons Rose8/15/2012 c3 
16tacticsbb
ughhhh why paty... you killed the story... i couldn't get past the first scene... why would Rosa be a killer sociopath? why don't you develop the character so that the reader (ME) understands why the sudden terrible plot twist.
this was too rushed. too rushed.
16tacticsbbughhhh why paty... you killed the story... i couldn't get past the first scene... why would Rosa be a killer sociopath? why don't you develop the character so that the reader (ME) understands why the sudden terrible plot twist.
this was too rushed. too rushed.
8/15/2012 c2 tacticsbb
AND like I predicted, I lol'ed HARD at this "… her name is Rosa Romero."
Anyhow, much better chapter than the first. Draco isn't OOC, you did a good job, except the last paragraph, that was super rushed.
Valentina reads fanfiction?
AND like I predicted, I lol'ed HARD at this "… her name is Rosa Romero."
Anyhow, much better chapter than the first. Draco isn't OOC, you did a good job, except the last paragraph, that was super rushed.
Valentina reads fanfiction?
8/15/2012 c1 tacticsbb
tsk tsk terrible. Let's see whats coming up next.
Ok not terrible. Good potential, question is, can you reach that potential?
tsk tsk terrible. Let's see whats coming up next.
Ok not terrible. Good potential, question is, can you reach that potential?
12/17/2011 c3 reviewer
This has been looking good, but have you had this chapter checked by your beta? Apart from that well done.
This has been looking good, but have you had this chapter checked by your beta? Apart from that well done.
8/3/2011 c1 5MadInLikeWithYou
It's very well written, and I can't wait to see where you go with the story. Update soon!
5MadInLikeWithYouIt's very well written, and I can't wait to see where you go with the story. Update soon!
8/3/2011 c1 Guest
Sweet please update later today or early tomorrow luv ya
AJ
Sweet please update later today or early tomorrow luv ya
AJ
8/3/2011 c1 xXMizz Alec VolturiXx
really good please go on! and cissa is prego yay! i love cissy she so sweet, I mean she deserves an order for being able to put up with evil lucius and insane bitch of a sister!
really good please go on! and cissa is prego yay! i love cissy she so sweet, I mean she deserves an order for being able to put up with evil lucius and insane bitch of a sister!