for What Goes Around Cums Around1/1 c1 paulieandgilbert
You know, the thing that bothers me the most about this story is that it doesn't bother me! now that's scary!
You know, the thing that bothers me the most about this story is that it doesn't bother me! now that's scary!
3/30/2018 c1 Toni Masen
Oooo,errrr, I have to say that was a bit of alright, nice twist with the lady/boy!
Oooo,errrr, I have to say that was a bit of alright, nice twist with the lady/boy!
1/30/2016 c1 Guest
Liked the story as a sex romp with consequences. Thought it could be developed with more back story about the relationships between the wife and son and him. Maybe the son could be gay
Liked the story as a sex romp with consequences. Thought it could be developed with more back story about the relationships between the wife and son and him. Maybe the son could be gay
5/11/2015 c1 Robward17
OMG...I should be disgusted with how much I enjoyed this, but I'm not. I like your twisted mind.
OMG...I should be disgusted with how much I enjoyed this, but I'm not. I like your twisted mind.
5/9/2015 c1 
3Evelyne-raconte
I just discovered this part, some alternating end for OFFSIDE, and "enjoy" it, if once could enjoy the end of Carlisle in this context. Who was the ladyboy who humiliate Carlisle so much and what are his/her reasons to do so ? Please can you answer ? Thank you for this OS.
3Evelyne-raconteI just discovered this part, some alternating end for OFFSIDE, and "enjoy" it, if once could enjoy the end of Carlisle in this context. Who was the ladyboy who humiliate Carlisle so much and what are his/her reasons to do so ? Please can you answer ? Thank you for this OS.
3/19/2013 c1 thunnababy
LOL! That was so delicious! Carlisle met his rightful end. It's been a very looong time since I read Savage's' story of Soccerward but it left an indelible mark on my brain so I'll never forget it. All her stories are like that. Unforgettable. You did a great job with this. Haha.
LOL! That was so delicious! Carlisle met his rightful end. It's been a very looong time since I read Savage's' story of Soccerward but it left an indelible mark on my brain so I'll never forget it. All her stories are like that. Unforgettable. You did a great job with this. Haha.
3/10/2013 c1 2borednhomealone
Holy shite. That's about all I can say after that one. I am a Daddy C girl, but dayum... I'm not sure what to say. LOL
2borednhomealoneHoly shite. That's about all I can say after that one. I am a Daddy C girl, but dayum... I'm not sure what to say. LOL
8/23/2012 c1 InspiredByLemons
Wow, FluffyLiz! Excellent o/s - I love the way you described his last few moments! (And great to meet you on Saturday, but the way!)
CC x
Wow, FluffyLiz! Excellent o/s - I love the way you described his last few moments! (And great to meet you on Saturday, but the way!)
CC x
8/3/2012 c1 Ellachanted
I always laugh when I read certain words because then I know you're a Brit LOL! Hostelry. Yeah. Not a word we use here in normal conversation.
And? I started to read Savage's story but couldn't because I just wanted to kill Carlisle. Thanks for doing it so spectacularly :)
I always laugh when I read certain words because then I know you're a Brit LOL! Hostelry. Yeah. Not a word we use here in normal conversation.
And? I started to read Savage's story but couldn't because I just wanted to kill Carlisle. Thanks for doing it so spectacularly :)
1/22/2012 c1 Celticdee
Aww-right, Fluffyliz! Very, very satisfying. What can I say that everyone else has already said...?
Don't hide your obvious talent (under a bush). Cum out, cum out and be appreciated. hehe
I like your style.
Yes, most definitely post a full-length story! Puleeeze!
Judy
Aww-right, Fluffyliz! Very, very satisfying. What can I say that everyone else has already said...?
Don't hide your obvious talent (under a bush). Cum out, cum out and be appreciated. hehe
I like your style.
Yes, most definitely post a full-length story! Puleeeze!
Judy