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2/6/2020 c9 Guest
Is this fanfic dead
Is this fanfic dead
2/9/2014 c9 Anony
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/31/2013 c7
1Darth Mittens42
Oh boy, yet another juicy piece of fanon I can sneak references to in my own fic.
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Oh boy, yet another juicy piece of fanon I can sneak references to in my own fic.
12/20/2013 c7 Anony
Ohhhh yes you are cruel.
What a cliffhanger!
But let me tell you, I'm glad started to realize certain things that made him think about rain. Lets are where this conversation is gonna head from here!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ohhhh yes you are cruel.
What a cliffhanger!
But let me tell you, I'm glad started to realize certain things that made him think about rain. Lets are where this conversation is gonna head from here!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/3/2013 c6 Anony
Oh hey there! I'm definitely looking forward to another chapter! No one writes alot for this fandom anymore so it's exciting to see a fresh story! I like where this one is going too, I've read one like it before but I'm interested to see where you take it! Great job, keep it up, and I can't wait for the next one!
Oh hey there! I'm definitely looking forward to another chapter! No one writes alot for this fandom anymore so it's exciting to see a fresh story! I like where this one is going too, I've read one like it before but I'm interested to see where you take it! Great job, keep it up, and I can't wait for the next one!
11/2/2012 c4
10AntichromeKing
Nice job this was one of the really great fanfics for this show that i have read
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Nice job this was one of the really great fanfics for this show that i have read
8/7/2012 c4
5rats xp
LOVE the story so far and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! :)
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LOVE the story so far and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! :)
11/23/2011 c4
15StraightedgeWingZero
pretty good why not put Domon Rain Argo and Natasha in some funny situations? for example some kids could run into Argo and call Natasha old lady over and over til she cracks
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pretty good why not put Domon Rain Argo and Natasha in some funny situations? for example some kids could run into Argo and call Natasha old lady over and over til she cracks
11/1/2011 c3
1Eletrickkid
Awesome story, perfect time too fir reading it, I just finished watching episode 49
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Awesome story, perfect time too fir reading it, I just finished watching episode 49
8/21/2011 c3
15StraightedgeWingZero
This is starting to get good Rain should dress causally a little sexy but not too sexy to attract Domon's attenion
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This is starting to get good Rain should dress causally a little sexy but not too sexy to attract Domon's attenion
8/9/2011 c2 StraightedgeWingZero
Alright I first things Rain needs to get clothes so the people who might fit the bill in expert shopping is Marie Louise,Allenby and the neo american crew. keep it up
Alright I first things Rain needs to get clothes so the people who might fit the bill in expert shopping is Marie Louise,Allenby and the neo american crew. keep it up