for A Donald and a Hortense5/26/2014 c1 odiosis
This made me explode out of cuteness. I loved it!
I love how you used the concept of fishes, it's quite unique. I adore you for writing this. :)
This made me explode out of cuteness. I loved it!
I love how you used the concept of fishes, it's quite unique. I adore you for writing this. :)
8/16/2011 c1 
3OptimisticallyHeartbroken
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
that was sooooooooo CUTE!
donald and hortense! XDXD
3OptimisticallyHeartbrokenAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
that was sooooooooo CUTE!
donald and hortense! XDXD
8/13/2011 c1 Miss.MaslowHenderson
Haha james in the "house of mirrors" I thought he'll be to busy looking ay himself but that hpuse of mirrors is tricky! XD
Awww kendall gave logan the goldfish soo sweet this was great!
I love it
Haha james in the "house of mirrors" I thought he'll be to busy looking ay himself but that hpuse of mirrors is tricky! XD
Awww kendall gave logan the goldfish soo sweet this was great!
I love it
8/7/2011 c1 7Manny101
This was very well done. The writer's block should be gone in no time!
The unspoken feelings the boys had for each other was evident between the lines - caring and playful. Logan's idea for a Hortence was just so sweet since it mirrored his life with Kendall. A perfect, tiny moment in Kogan life.
You put a smile on my face. Again, well done!
7Manny101This was very well done. The writer's block should be gone in no time!
The unspoken feelings the boys had for each other was evident between the lines - caring and playful. Logan's idea for a Hortence was just so sweet since it mirrored his life with Kendall. A perfect, tiny moment in Kogan life.
You put a smile on my face. Again, well done!
8/5/2011 c1 lolingatyou
Oh my goodness! This was the cutest thing ever. I love me some Kogan... I love how Carlos called the fishey Don Aldo, such a Carlos thing :) And then at the end when Logan was going to the store to find Hortense, I actually "D'awww"ed out loud. Really loud. Lol your stories are amazing, truly gifted writer, and if anyone tells you any different, they're completely mental. I love this story so much, it's in my favourites :D
Oh my goodness! This was the cutest thing ever. I love me some Kogan... I love how Carlos called the fishey Don Aldo, such a Carlos thing :) And then at the end when Logan was going to the store to find Hortense, I actually "D'awww"ed out loud. Really loud. Lol your stories are amazing, truly gifted writer, and if anyone tells you any different, they're completely mental. I love this story so much, it's in my favourites :D
8/5/2011 c1 45Anim3Fan4Ever
awwww... this makes me wanna squeel! =D ... SCREW THE NEIGHBORS! *squeels loudly* SOOO CUTE!
45Anim3Fan4Everawwww... this makes me wanna squeel! =D ... SCREW THE NEIGHBORS! *squeels loudly* SOOO CUTE!
8/4/2011 c1 Scarlett
very sweet :B
Hortense xD
hha
I love it!
very sweet :B
Hortense xD
hha
I love it!
8/4/2011 c1 9veryjaneeyre
This was amusing and fluffy; just the right combination to put a smile on my face.
"Or, as Carlos insisted on calling him, "Don Aldo."" This line is gold. I'm still chuckling about it.
If this is your writing while having writer's block, then I can't wait to read what you write when you get your mojo back!
9veryjaneeyreThis was amusing and fluffy; just the right combination to put a smile on my face.
"Or, as Carlos insisted on calling him, "Don Aldo."" This line is gold. I'm still chuckling about it.
If this is your writing while having writer's block, then I can't wait to read what you write when you get your mojo back!