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5/30/2020 c27 Poohkani
Found this story recently. I enjoyed it but I didn't feel like it's the original natsume because he was toooo good for mikan . The Natsume in GA always teased her. I liked this vampire story better than twilight. Thank you for writing this.
1/25/2020 c27 Momo Gly
This is so romantic. Natsume is so romantic. Im screaming for their romanticness!
1/25/2020 c23 Momo Gly
I love this. I love you also author. The way you write is impressive. Hope you could make more of this :)
1/24/2020 c10 Momo Gly
Well, i cant say anything. Mikan is too furious right now at this chap. Good luck natsume!
1/24/2020 c2 Guest
I like the way you write your stories. Little bit rush but detailed or definitive I must say.
8/21/2018 c27 Guest
Okay, so I read this fic a few years back, back when it wasn't completed and I returned to it because of Gakuen Alice feels and let me just say... I love the gothic vibe to it, I love how you work the dialogue into the narration so seamlessly, I love how you use "fancy talk" - big words like litany for example (I remember that one the most). Like the dialogue is so erudite, I'm writing something about the upper crust of society and this book gave me so much inspiration - I hope you don't mind me using your story as a textbook, though, I won't do anything you're not comfortable with. I love the relationships, not just romantic but how the characters all fall into one another. Mikan is so elegant and sophisticated and she's always the bigger person but Yuu needs to calm her down. Ruka was so flamboyant at the beginning but so precious. Natsume wasn't emotionless, he was subtle but intense and I really liked that. Even Anna and Hotaru were so interesting because they're Rasas so different from each other. Yuu stole the show for me cuz he was like the butler but not really and he was loyal but was not afraid to put everyone in line. I loved the equality of the relationships. Natsume treated Mikan like an equal and I appreciated that. He always made sure everyone made their own decisions and didn't force anyone to do anything they didn't believe in and that is really honorable. All this to say: I loved your story.
I was disappointed when I came back to this site to read my favorite fanfictions. The writing was kind of underwhelming and not that good, in my opinion, for most of them. I guess age came with higher standards. But yours didn't disappoint at all, quite the opposite.
I also have a request, if that's okay. You know the chapter when Mikan loses her memories and Natsume talks about how her lips can turn red with enough motivation? I really liked that expression. I was wondering if I could borrow it or maybe you could give me some tips on how to play the sexy, elegant, seductive dialogue you have going on? I just really really loved this story and it just got better with age, like wine. Are you working on something else for the fandom? Just out of curiosity. Also do you have accounts on other sites?
Okay, that's it. You are lovely and I love your story and tell me if I can use the lip expression but if not is totally cool, some tips would be awesome. Have a great day!
10/29/2017 c27 Sakuramy
I loved this you do a lot of gakuen alice which i like can u make a sequel about yuu and anna they are cute as well in this story like a short one just saying anyway im going to go find another one of you storys to read i cant choose but ill read one anyway
7/18/2017 c27 3TheShiroNeko
So good, so good. I was in tears, this story is soooo well written.

Thank you so much for such an awesome read!

Love,
Shiro
3/28/2017 c1 tentenshi31
Hi! i have read this story for already 3 times and I thonk this not the best one there is but there is something addictive about it and I just can't help but read it all the way. It is consistent especially the grammar, sappy at times and I kinda hate it that Mikan cries a lot but you would drop some beautiful lines here and there and I love you for it. I hope you keep writing more fics in the future! <3
9/27/2015 c18 Undertheskys
Why is Koko on his side!?
9/27/2015 c14 Undertheskys
WHAT THE FRICK! I THOUGHT HE AS IN "KENDIAR" WAS DEAD! OMG LOVING THE TWIST IN THE STORY
9/27/2015 c10 Undertheskys
I wonder if Sumire gunna show up, hopefully shes nice. But i also wonder when Luna is appear not that i like her or anything, she just makes it kinda interesting...
9/27/2015 c9 Undertheskys
UH where's Koko?
5/18/2015 c27 viha
Waaaah
loved it
Keep it up _
1/28/2015 c9 53FireFaithe Pikamon01
DON'T SAY IT SO CALMLY, YA IDIOT!
I was a bit confused in this chapter )*x*(
To the next chapter!
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