for Ashes of the Past9/20 c124 Guest
Also interesting for Gary to train that Sableye that Team Rocket manipulated in canon.
Also interesting for Gary to train that Sableye that Team Rocket manipulated in canon.
9/20 c76 Guest
*Corphish and Snivy are 1st stage and not even fully evolved. Torkoal doesn't evolve. Leavanny Krokodile is fully evolved. Palpitoad is at least 2nd stage.
*Corphish and Snivy are 1st stage and not even fully evolved. Torkoal doesn't evolve. Leavanny Krokodile is fully evolved. Palpitoad is at least 2nd stage.
9/13 c43 
1Jpx0999
the idea giovanni just says something which makes team rocket speechless every time they eet is hilarious
1Jpx0999the idea giovanni just says something which makes team rocket speechless every time they eet is hilarious
9/13 c94 1ThatOneFan
You know, every time I go back and reread this, I marvle at how much I like Giovanni. Sure, he's an evil criminal mastermind, but damn has he got class.
1ThatOneFanYou know, every time I go back and reread this, I marvle at how much I like Giovanni. Sure, he's an evil criminal mastermind, but damn has he got class.
9/11 c75 ThatOneFan
I know this was written way before even the idea of Pokemon Journies, but I am absloutly headcanoning that trophy was the World Championship cup.
I know this was written way before even the idea of Pokemon Journies, but I am absloutly headcanoning that trophy was the World Championship cup.
9/10 c112 Guest
How dare you create the most character ever and then have him exit stage right
this is libel! this is injustice! this is absolutely perfect!
How dare you create the most character ever and then have him exit stage right
this is libel! this is injustice! this is absolutely perfect!
9/4 c29 25KsandraMallan
As much as I liked the old film bits, I definitely found this one much more concise and easy to get through!
also good to see Bruno again
25KsandraMallanAs much as I liked the old film bits, I definitely found this one much more concise and easy to get through!
also good to see Bruno again
9/4 c25 KsandraMallan
Rereading through and I have to compliment you on adding the Slowbro stuff! Great way to get past a powerful Psychic. And I did notice the Focus Sash!
Rereading through and I have to compliment you on adding the Slowbro stuff! Great way to get past a powerful Psychic. And I did notice the Focus Sash!
9/3 c1 Guest
I remember i read this until chapters 100-120 because i had school tests. Years later i feel the necessity of finishing this story xD
I remember i read this until chapters 100-120 because i had school tests. Years later i feel the necessity of finishing this story xD
8/13 c18 2KvAT
Damn, eternally gaming with Arceus is probably fun.
...at least for the first few decades.
2KvATDamn, eternally gaming with Arceus is probably fun.
...at least for the first few decades.
8/12 c6 KvAT
Nice approach to Team Rocket's true goals. The other Teams in Gen 3-6 are canonically hell-bent on fillping the whole world upside down, while canon Team Rocket is just an underground mafia; I've always had the feeling that Giovanni is too competent for Team Rocket to be 'just' an underground mafia, though.
Nice approach to Team Rocket's true goals. The other Teams in Gen 3-6 are canonically hell-bent on fillping the whole world upside down, while canon Team Rocket is just an underground mafia; I've always had the feeling that Giovanni is too competent for Team Rocket to be 'just' an underground mafia, though.
8/10 c144 7Mysteryfan17
OK, the Façade on a Breloom took me straight to a video of an animated nuzlock. Not sure if you ever watch them but JadenAnimations used Onion (her Breloom) in this gym and Norman's Façade... well. she gave the visual that I just pictured this time around, even if it was I believe the Slaking not a Vigoroth.
7Mysteryfan17OK, the Façade on a Breloom took me straight to a video of an animated nuzlock. Not sure if you ever watch them but JadenAnimations used Onion (her Breloom) in this gym and Norman's Façade... well. she gave the visual that I just pictured this time around, even if it was I believe the Slaking not a Vigoroth.