for Passion Burns Deep10/3/2011 c11 
1EdhelwenOnieta
oh please update soon! im loving it and cant wait to find out whats next!
1EdhelwenOnietaoh please update soon! im loving it and cant wait to find out whats next!
9/26/2011 c10 FatHarleyQuinn
Fantastic work so far. I'm really excited to see how you finish! The bit about Ron really made me hate him though.:b
Fantastic work so far. I'm really excited to see how you finish! The bit about Ron really made me hate him though.:b
8/28/2011 c10 no14sure
another heads up, some of your dialogue is a bit stiff and a bit unnatural..but other than that, remember to proofread and again, and more importantly, PLEASE update! the storyline just got really interesting, so i'll be waiting for an update sometime soon :)
another heads up, some of your dialogue is a bit stiff and a bit unnatural..but other than that, remember to proofread and again, and more importantly, PLEASE update! the storyline just got really interesting, so i'll be waiting for an update sometime soon :)
8/27/2011 c2 no14sure
great story so far, and i'm liking how its kept real, but just a heads up for this story and ony others you're planning on writing, always proofread your work. sometimes, the mistakes are just things like spelling mistakes, which can be easily fixed via spell check, but then sometimes, your grammar is bad or there even missing chunks in sentences. so yeah, just proofread. but other than that, good work :)
great story so far, and i'm liking how its kept real, but just a heads up for this story and ony others you're planning on writing, always proofread your work. sometimes, the mistakes are just things like spelling mistakes, which can be easily fixed via spell check, but then sometimes, your grammar is bad or there even missing chunks in sentences. so yeah, just proofread. but other than that, good work :)
8/18/2011 c9 continue
pretty pretty please with a cherry on top continue this story
it would have such a good story line!
pretty pretty please with a cherry on top continue this story
it would have such a good story line!
8/15/2011 c9 6Blue Eyes Blonde Dragon
Ooooh, I like this!
Feels nice that you're not stressed out, most stress through their stories to get to the point where Hermione and Draco meets, you really haven't though. That's good!
I might not be a fan of Ron-bashing though (Never really got why some people make him so mean, I never thought that he was mean in the books. Stupid and dense, yes, but not mean.) That doesn't mean I won't read this story though! ^^
Btw, nice way you wrote the whole Veritaseum part. Really got the impression that that's the way it is in the books. The way you ask one simple question and you get a really informative answer simply because everything spills out.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! ^^
6Blue Eyes Blonde DragonOoooh, I like this!
Feels nice that you're not stressed out, most stress through their stories to get to the point where Hermione and Draco meets, you really haven't though. That's good!
I might not be a fan of Ron-bashing though (Never really got why some people make him so mean, I never thought that he was mean in the books. Stupid and dense, yes, but not mean.) That doesn't mean I won't read this story though! ^^
Btw, nice way you wrote the whole Veritaseum part. Really got the impression that that's the way it is in the books. The way you ask one simple question and you get a really informative answer simply because everything spills out.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! ^^
8/12/2011 c8 EdhelwenOnieta
yikes! ron's is for sure an idiot. i have never really liked him.
please update soon. good job. cant wait for the next part.
yikes! ron's is for sure an idiot. i have never really liked him.
please update soon. good job. cant wait for the next part.
8/9/2011 c1 17Manhattan's Queen
This is good so far. I'm just a little confused on how Draco got into Gryffindor Tower. Also, I think things are a little rushed. I mean they hate each other usually and they are talking civil and kissing and such... But anyways I am going to keep reading and maybe figure it out!
17Manhattan's QueenThis is good so far. I'm just a little confused on how Draco got into Gryffindor Tower. Also, I think things are a little rushed. I mean they hate each other usually and they are talking civil and kissing and such... But anyways I am going to keep reading and maybe figure it out!