
11/7/2015 c1 Guest
Aww.
Aww.
4/8/2013 c1 Guest
Oh, how cute!
Oh, how cute!
12/11/2011 c1 kamimimi
If Red had asked me to kiss him (or anyone for that matter), I'd have stood there and gaped until the sun exploded. Trufax right there. Coz I'm impossibly shy.
-_-"
If Red had asked me to kiss him (or anyone for that matter), I'd have stood there and gaped until the sun exploded. Trufax right there. Coz I'm impossibly shy.
-_-"
11/1/2011 c1 Rai
Green suddenly taking control was a bit... Odd xD Didn't really fit, but overall it was really cute ^^
Green suddenly taking control was a bit... Odd xD Didn't really fit, but overall it was really cute ^^
8/27/2011 c1
18Plasma Pegasus
Cue melted, fangirly goop in 3... 2... 1...
That was... adorable. Just... just adorable. I wish I could give you a better, more coherent review... one with critiques, with my appreciating more in-depth why I liked this, how wonderful your word choice was, the cute and awkward manners of Green and Red's... Red... ways...
...but the cuteness... ;A;

Cue melted, fangirly goop in 3... 2... 1...
That was... adorable. Just... just adorable. I wish I could give you a better, more coherent review... one with critiques, with my appreciating more in-depth why I liked this, how wonderful your word choice was, the cute and awkward manners of Green and Red's... Red... ways...
...but the cuteness... ;A;
8/12/2011 c1 ShonenAiFreak94
Aww... It's so sweet!
The way Red's trying to take the initiative and Green's clumsiness are just adorable!
I like how you described them both in detail using many adverbs and all. That gives good insight into what's actually going on inside their heads so you can really empathize with them.
You could've used some metaphors or comparisons as well.
Also, their feelings seem so genuine that I can actually feel the butterflies in their stomachs.
It's just DAMN CUTE! /
I hope your Nerin likes it as much as I do!
♥♥♥
Aww... It's so sweet!
The way Red's trying to take the initiative and Green's clumsiness are just adorable!
I like how you described them both in detail using many adverbs and all. That gives good insight into what's actually going on inside their heads so you can really empathize with them.
You could've used some metaphors or comparisons as well.
Also, their feelings seem so genuine that I can actually feel the butterflies in their stomachs.
It's just DAMN CUTE! /
I hope your Nerin likes it as much as I do!
♥♥♥