for you leave, you loose11/15/2012 c16 Breeze R. 321
LUV IT PPPPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAA AAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEE WRITE MORE ASAP!
LUV IT PPPPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAA AAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEE WRITE MORE ASAP!
11/12/2012 c16 csp4
I started laughing way before I even knew what the pranks were::)) I understand Edward & Rose will be soooo PO'd at Emmett (he's such an idiot lol) but the idea Alice will also be pranked is hysterical!
I started laughing way before I even knew what the pranks were::)) I understand Edward & Rose will be soooo PO'd at Emmett (he's such an idiot lol) but the idea Alice will also be pranked is hysterical!
11/9/2012 c16 twilightlover
up date soon plz!
up date soon plz!
411/9/2012 c13 MaryMary123
I am glad you slowed down the B & E business. He hurt her and just to jump back in made no sense. You write well.
I am glad you slowed down the B & E business. He hurt her and just to jump back in made no sense. You write well.
11/9/2012 c10 MaryMary123
It was fine. Word most people on reservations are very poor. So a honeymoon in Paris far fetched. That is fine it is your story you can change it up. Just saying that if you do some research reservations are generally very poor.
It was fine. Word most people on reservations are very poor. So a honeymoon in Paris far fetched. That is fine it is your story you can change it up. Just saying that if you do some research reservations are generally very poor.
11/9/2012 c9 MaryMary123
I can not speak for others reviews. I can only tell you your writing is good. The quick recovery in B & E getting back together seemed TOO QUICK. So that may have been a mistake on your part. In the end here we are. The Volturi and The Pack will not forgive them as quick as Bella will. They have become her family. So the Cullens minus Alice have to Earn their way back.
I can not speak for others reviews. I can only tell you your writing is good. The quick recovery in B & E getting back together seemed TOO QUICK. So that may have been a mistake on your part. In the end here we are. The Volturi and The Pack will not forgive them as quick as Bella will. They have become her family. So the Cullens minus Alice have to Earn their way back.
11/9/2012 c8 MaryMary123
well.. Ed & B got back together rather quick? After 3 years and 3 kids and she was still mad.
well.. Ed & B got back together rather quick? After 3 years and 3 kids and she was still mad.
11/6/2012 c16 Guest
I love your story but could plz finish it I would to what happens next
I love your story but could plz finish it I would to what happens next
10/4/2012 c15 csp4
"Hey guys what's up" lol lol No doubt while Alice & Jasper have been gone, the rest of the Cullen's have been sitting around holding their breath & mentally hitting themselves on the head for being so stupid (hopefully lol) 3 years earlier. Then after hours & hours Jasper walks in as if nothing unusual happened:::))
"You were almost killed by our nephew that is AWESOME" lol lol lol you've got Emmett's personality down pat::))
Emmett's going to have a great time helping Jason pull pranks on the other Cullen's, but I have a feeling that's not all Jason has planned::)) Watch out Emmett!
"Hey guys what's up" lol lol No doubt while Alice & Jasper have been gone, the rest of the Cullen's have been sitting around holding their breath & mentally hitting themselves on the head for being so stupid (hopefully lol) 3 years earlier. Then after hours & hours Jasper walks in as if nothing unusual happened:::))
"You were almost killed by our nephew that is AWESOME" lol lol lol you've got Emmett's personality down pat::))
Emmett's going to have a great time helping Jason pull pranks on the other Cullen's, but I have a feeling that's not all Jason has planned::)) Watch out Emmett!