for The Seekers3/27/2021 c9 gelfrecs
What I've loved about this story is the portrayal of feelings of trauma in Harry and Cho. I've loved how the narration details what Harry and Cho feel at every moment, especially when they are getting to know each other at the beginning. I relate to those feelings of trauma, inadequacy and self-hate.
What I've loved about this story is the portrayal of feelings of trauma in Harry and Cho. I've loved how the narration details what Harry and Cho feel at every moment, especially when they are getting to know each other at the beginning. I relate to those feelings of trauma, inadequacy and self-hate.
1/20/2020 c9 BillBrink
This was my second time through and just as enjoyable. Thanks
This was my second time through and just as enjoyable. Thanks
1/17/2019 c4 
31VonPelt
Honestly, Quidditch is treated with more reverence than religion here, and it makes for an odd but not enjoyable story because the flowery language would fit ice dancing but not a sport where cannonballs are hurled at flying players and eight people play a mixture of football and basketball. And it especially does not fit a British setting. I mean, just listen to the Premier League commentary.
31VonPeltHonestly, Quidditch is treated with more reverence than religion here, and it makes for an odd but not enjoyable story because the flowery language would fit ice dancing but not a sport where cannonballs are hurled at flying players and eight people play a mixture of football and basketball. And it especially does not fit a British setting. I mean, just listen to the Premier League commentary.
8/27/2018 c9 2Jwake
Really enjoyed the story. The feelings of Harry and Cho felt not only for each other but how they dealt with their feels when facing situations was really well done. All of the quidditch scenes were hands down fantastic. Kinda sad to see no sequel happened for this but never the less, this was such a good read.
2JwakeReally enjoyed the story. The feelings of Harry and Cho felt not only for each other but how they dealt with their feels when facing situations was really well done. All of the quidditch scenes were hands down fantastic. Kinda sad to see no sequel happened for this but never the less, this was such a good read.
5/29/2018 c2 1Fugacity7
That was possibly the best written snitch-chase I've read. That part of the story was nicely done. It's kind of a shame I only just found this story and I doubt you even follow the reviews any more.
1Fugacity7That was possibly the best written snitch-chase I've read. That part of the story was nicely done. It's kind of a shame I only just found this story and I doubt you even follow the reviews any more.
4/9/2018 c9 Guest
you know I want to like this story, because I love Cho Chang but if you have to make Ginny and by extension the Weasleys villains to make Cho a viable love interest for Harry, you made a mistake but it was an interesting story, the emotions were intense and Cho's journey was interesting, I did love the early chapters or anything with games
you know I want to like this story, because I love Cho Chang but if you have to make Ginny and by extension the Weasleys villains to make Cho a viable love interest for Harry, you made a mistake but it was an interesting story, the emotions were intense and Cho's journey was interesting, I did love the early chapters or anything with games
4/4/2016 c3 Guest
This is so beautifully written! Thank you for giving Cho the kind of character development she kinda lacked in the book!
This is so beautifully written! Thank you for giving Cho the kind of character development she kinda lacked in the book!
2/4/2015 c9 Um the Muse
Very well done, sir. I liked seeing Cho's perspective, seeing Harry's aerial acrobatics as poetry in motion. I felt like the two really did care for each other.
The best part, though, was how Ron had to make such a tough choice and how he reacted afterwards. Too many people write a very simple-minded Ron, good or evil. It's nice to see a story where he is more nuanced and more complex in a way that seems true to his character.
Very well done, sir. I liked seeing Cho's perspective, seeing Harry's aerial acrobatics as poetry in motion. I felt like the two really did care for each other.
The best part, though, was how Ron had to make such a tough choice and how he reacted afterwards. Too many people write a very simple-minded Ron, good or evil. It's nice to see a story where he is more nuanced and more complex in a way that seems true to his character.
7/12/2013 c7 agnar
Ok uh harry is bound, but he still has his wand, he can RAISE his wand to point at Cho, but he's also still bound somehow... Sorry is your Harry fucking retarded?
Yeah, don't try to free yourself, or cast anything at Ginny, or free Cho... Just cast, for some insane reason, the finite which uh, doesn't STOP the crucio btw, the caster stopping the spell ends crucio, so I don't know what the hell that's about.
And I have no clue what the fucio or whatever spell is, but instead of making himself weaker, since he HAS HIS WAND he ought to be attacking freaking Ginny.
Ok uh harry is bound, but he still has his wand, he can RAISE his wand to point at Cho, but he's also still bound somehow... Sorry is your Harry fucking retarded?
Yeah, don't try to free yourself, or cast anything at Ginny, or free Cho... Just cast, for some insane reason, the finite which uh, doesn't STOP the crucio btw, the caster stopping the spell ends crucio, so I don't know what the hell that's about.
And I have no clue what the fucio or whatever spell is, but instead of making himself weaker, since he HAS HIS WAND he ought to be attacking freaking Ginny.