
1/16/2012 c9
11McKenzieSchick
Awwwww loved it! Tool cute! Derek and Chloe are just the cutest thing ever! Update now! :D

Awwwww loved it! Tool cute! Derek and Chloe are just the cutest thing ever! Update now! :D
1/15/2012 c8 VixenGirl
Hello I was wondering if u was going to update this soon bc I can not wait to find out what happens...I really like this plot u have going on so keep up the good writing and PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE sincerely a devoted fan of your writing :)
Hello I was wondering if u was going to update this soon bc I can not wait to find out what happens...I really like this plot u have going on so keep up the good writing and PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE sincerely a devoted fan of your writing :)
1/4/2012 c8 Auden
oh please update SOON! i love this story and all your other ones as well!
oh please update SOON! i love this story and all your other ones as well!
12/28/2011 c8 ChloeDerek xXx
Plz continue! It's Awsome story! 3
Plz continue! It's Awsome story! 3
11/28/2011 c8
1CatTheCheshire
I love it :) you really need to update soon or i will go crazy. btw i love the milo and simon thing. a story is never complete without a cute gay couple ;)

I love it :) you really need to update soon or i will go crazy. btw i love the milo and simon thing. a story is never complete without a cute gay couple ;)
11/19/2011 c8 no name but good reviews
wow that was amasing r u goung to make simon and milo get together and is steve chloes dad the kelpie and when will chloe change back to human and all the other stuff
wow that was amasing r u goung to make simon and milo get together and is steve chloes dad the kelpie and when will chloe change back to human and all the other stuff
11/11/2011 c8
9arkyytior
AWWW! CHLOE! POOR BABY!
And weird...You had to do the gay thing huh? x3
Anyway love the story!

AWWW! CHLOE! POOR BABY!
And weird...You had to do the gay thing huh? x3
Anyway love the story!
11/10/2011 c8
6Shay Wolfe
wow derek u idiot! i luv this and i demand more! hey eveybody i write my reviews with my DSi! no joke! the rest of this review is just me ranting about my shitty school life. i need to do this or i'll snap again soon. my life is a living hell btw 2day i got called a bitch AND a whore when im clearly neither! and i kept getting hit in the head with a ball durring gym. its such a god awful day that i ended up snapping during gym and started crying! and people who know me know that i dont cry easily at all. eg i will feel super sad but i wont cry even after reading The Scarlet Ibis in English 2day. usually i can take in the bullying but apparently not 2day. i started to shake during gym because for some reason i just was scared of the balls. it was awful. i can still feel the paths my tears fell in now, over 3 hours ago! i actually ended up in the counseling office. i just want sympathy. i have multiple personas but on the inside deep deep down im just a pathetic loser. a weakling who can't speak up for their self. im so fucking useless. but on the bright side of things i got a new contact in my cell phone! the person is awsome...i might like him but im not real sure...my last love didnt go so well. my crush asked my for wat i thought about his situation with his crush! i think he might've led me on cuz he asked me to homecoming and said i was cute and stuff. not to mention the fact that i bearly see him since hes taking colloage classes at the U of M(Minnesota) becuz hes a PSEO. so i started to wonder if i really did like him or if i just wanted a boyfriend like my friends. and one of my friends hes a yr older than me and he treats me like a kid! he always says stuff like "i'll tell u when ur older" and makes fun of my height. this is wat he tells me on Monday "i know why ur so loud all the time. u have to make up for ur shortness." isnt that mean? and he always tickles me and fakes kicking me it sucks! shit out of room;(
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wow derek u idiot! i luv this and i demand more! hey eveybody i write my reviews with my DSi! no joke! the rest of this review is just me ranting about my shitty school life. i need to do this or i'll snap again soon. my life is a living hell btw 2day i got called a bitch AND a whore when im clearly neither! and i kept getting hit in the head with a ball durring gym. its such a god awful day that i ended up snapping during gym and started crying! and people who know me know that i dont cry easily at all. eg i will feel super sad but i wont cry even after reading The Scarlet Ibis in English 2day. usually i can take in the bullying but apparently not 2day. i started to shake during gym because for some reason i just was scared of the balls. it was awful. i can still feel the paths my tears fell in now, over 3 hours ago! i actually ended up in the counseling office. i just want sympathy. i have multiple personas but on the inside deep deep down im just a pathetic loser. a weakling who can't speak up for their self. im so fucking useless. but on the bright side of things i got a new contact in my cell phone! the person is awsome...i might like him but im not real sure...my last love didnt go so well. my crush asked my for wat i thought about his situation with his crush! i think he might've led me on cuz he asked me to homecoming and said i was cute and stuff. not to mention the fact that i bearly see him since hes taking colloage classes at the U of M(Minnesota) becuz hes a PSEO. so i started to wonder if i really did like him or if i just wanted a boyfriend like my friends. and one of my friends hes a yr older than me and he treats me like a kid! he always says stuff like "i'll tell u when ur older" and makes fun of my height. this is wat he tells me on Monday "i know why ur so loud all the time. u have to make up for ur shortness." isnt that mean? and he always tickles me and fakes kicking me it sucks! shit out of room;(
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