for Even angels fall1/31/2012 c1 
2smirkforever
Wow, that was really good. One thing, you really need someone to look over your spelling and grammar or a beta to ore-read before you post. I was able to understand the writing but it took effort. So I want to read more but I really think a beta would help your stories. Overall nice job!
2smirkforeverWow, that was really good. One thing, you really need someone to look over your spelling and grammar or a beta to ore-read before you post. I was able to understand the writing but it took effort. So I want to read more but I really think a beta would help your stories. Overall nice job!
9/8/2011 c1 17mac-reye
Please write a sequel! Please please please. Maybe one where Abby just barely stays alive, please. Awesome job
17mac-reyePlease write a sequel! Please please please. Maybe one where Abby just barely stays alive, please. Awesome job
8/24/2011 c1 5loverofallthings
aaaaawwwww it was good id like to see a sequel were there at the hospital and all the familys there and there thoughts too.
5loverofallthingsaaaaawwwww it was good id like to see a sequel were there at the hospital and all the familys there and there thoughts too.