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12/6/2011 c1 5Chicken and Cheese
No! Not the end! That was entertaining, and I liked the length, perfect if one is not in the mood to read big long stories! Just two or three grammatical mistakes: in the summary, you forgot the ' in "it's"; you said "intern" instead of "in turn"; and here, "He didn't want a big, fancy funeral; with loads...", I think you'd put in , rather than ; . I'm just being picky, but I really loved this story, even if it was the end! :D

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