for Ulterior Motive7/13/2018 c1 Guest
That was just wonderful!
That was just wonderful!
5/12/2012 c1 Justsuzaku
I'd love to see you continue or do something else
about steve's "virtue". I love
Steve for his innocence, he gives me
hope when it comes to men in the real
world.
I'd love to see you continue or do something else
about steve's "virtue". I love
Steve for his innocence, he gives me
hope when it comes to men in the real
world.
4/17/2012 c1 iii
Because really who could ruin that cute charming naivety? :-)
Because really who could ruin that cute charming naivety? :-)
11/20/2011 c1 Withdrawn
This is an absolutely adorable little oneshot. I highly enjoyed the formatting and how exactly each girl's attempts went awry (though two or so more examples, while not a necessity, would have been appreciated), you really hit the perfect middle ground with the amount of details for those little mini-stories. Additionally I think you really managed to perfectly get across the film's feel comedic atmosphere and Steve's incredibly genuine feel, so major props on that. Finally as an aside: was the girl who slapped him the one he thought of in your other fic when he's thinking on past girl-failures while talking to Darcy? If so it's a nice touch.
This is an absolutely adorable little oneshot. I highly enjoyed the formatting and how exactly each girl's attempts went awry (though two or so more examples, while not a necessity, would have been appreciated), you really hit the perfect middle ground with the amount of details for those little mini-stories. Additionally I think you really managed to perfectly get across the film's feel comedic atmosphere and Steve's incredibly genuine feel, so major props on that. Finally as an aside: was the girl who slapped him the one he thought of in your other fic when he's thinking on past girl-failures while talking to Darcy? If so it's a nice touch.
9/29/2011 c1 
29Kairan1979
That was really funny - I can easily imagine clueless Steve and the frustration of ISO girls.
29Kairan1979That was really funny - I can easily imagine clueless Steve and the frustration of ISO girls.
8/26/2011 c1 44anubislover
Dawwwwww! That last line was so cute! Love this, short, sweet, and to the point. I could so see this happening in the movie. Nice work!
44anubisloverDawwwwww! That last line was so cute! Love this, short, sweet, and to the point. I could so see this happening in the movie. Nice work!
8/22/2011 c1 3Zarz
This is really cute! I just saw the movie, and there definitely needs to be more missing-scenes fanfic. I love how Steve is totally clueless, but also completely honorable. Great work!
3ZarzThis is really cute! I just saw the movie, and there definitely needs to be more missing-scenes fanfic. I love how Steve is totally clueless, but also completely honorable. Great work!
8/16/2011 c1 13Kirixchi
I love, love, LOVE this! What a fantastic idea! You suggested so many "mini stories" with writing that was economical but still vivid! Bravo! Possibly my very favorite CA story!
13KirixchiI love, love, LOVE this! What a fantastic idea! You suggested so many "mini stories" with writing that was economical but still vivid! Bravo! Possibly my very favorite CA story!
8/15/2011 c1 OneTooManyBooks
A good story about the rather puratin aspects of Captain America/Steve Rogers. It would have been nicer to see it as a series of three one-shots. Although a good start for the canon.
A good story about the rather puratin aspects of Captain America/Steve Rogers. It would have been nicer to see it as a series of three one-shots. Although a good start for the canon.