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7/13/2018 c1 Guest
That was just wonderful!
7/13/2012 c1 10Ziva Lou
Haha, the Oblivious Captain America!
5/12/2012 c1 Justsuzaku
I'd love to see you continue or do something else

about steve's "virtue". I love

Steve for his innocence, he gives me

hope when it comes to men in the real

world.
4/17/2012 c1 iii
Because really who could ruin that cute charming naivety? :-)
3/21/2012 c1 LaughingLadybug
I'm glad revies make you happy. How do you add notes to your story?
1/2/2012 c1 7mecca-boyde
hahhaha I love awkward Steve.
11/20/2011 c1 Withdrawn
This is an absolutely adorable little oneshot. I highly enjoyed the formatting and how exactly each girl's attempts went awry (though two or so more examples, while not a necessity, would have been appreciated), you really hit the perfect middle ground with the amount of details for those little mini-stories. Additionally I think you really managed to perfectly get across the film's feel comedic atmosphere and Steve's incredibly genuine feel, so major props on that. Finally as an aside: was the girl who slapped him the one he thought of in your other fic when he's thinking on past girl-failures while talking to Darcy? If so it's a nice touch.
9/29/2011 c1 28Kairan1979
That was really funny - I can easily imagine clueless Steve and the frustration of ISO girls.
9/9/2011 c1 lazyguy90
Haha brilliant.
8/26/2011 c1 44anubislover
Dawwwwww! That last line was so cute! Love this, short, sweet, and to the point. I could so see this happening in the movie. Nice work!
8/22/2011 c1 3Zarz
This is really cute! I just saw the movie, and there definitely needs to be more missing-scenes fanfic. I love how Steve is totally clueless, but also completely honorable. Great work!
8/16/2011 c1 13Kirixchi
I love, love, LOVE this! What a fantastic idea! You suggested so many "mini stories" with writing that was economical but still vivid! Bravo! Possibly my very favorite CA story!
8/15/2011 c1 OneTooManyBooks
A good story about the rather puratin aspects of Captain America/Steve Rogers. It would have been nicer to see it as a series of three one-shots. Although a good start for the canon.

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