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13Magikoopa981
Hahahaha this is wonderful! I'm not sure if you're writing is getting funnier every chapter or I'm just getting more and more into the humor. I love it! Random Points I want to make:
For some reason I laughed the most at Sue's conversation with Drew about goomba hands. I dunno.
I really like that you're creating this consistently funny randomness while also growing an interesting story.
I like your use of faces O_o :3 :D in the story. Gives it a nice fun loose feel.
Ummm please don't take a year to update!
Thank you for the read! :D
13Magikoopa981Hahahaha this is wonderful! I'm not sure if you're writing is getting funnier every chapter or I'm just getting more and more into the humor. I love it! Random Points I want to make:
For some reason I laughed the most at Sue's conversation with Drew about goomba hands. I dunno.
I really like that you're creating this consistently funny randomness while also growing an interesting story.
I like your use of faces O_o :3 :D in the story. Gives it a nice fun loose feel.
Ummm please don't take a year to update!
Thank you for the read! :D
7/15/2012 c2 6Vulcanicity
I need to get me that box. Then I could reek havoc on the pokemon fandom. Even more so than I already am.
6VulcanicityI need to get me that box. Then I could reek havoc on the pokemon fandom. Even more so than I already am.
5/25/2012 c1 8AlwaysNinja
Okay, so I'm rereading this, and now I get all of the Kingdom Hearts references! I got addicted to it recently, sped through 1 and 2, and now reread this for fun. So, just to comment... SAIX PUPPY! :D
Okay... Now I shall pull from one of my favorite characters and say...
Run! Run away!
8AlwaysNinjaOkay, so I'm rereading this, and now I get all of the Kingdom Hearts references! I got addicted to it recently, sped through 1 and 2, and now reread this for fun. So, just to comment... SAIX PUPPY! :D
Okay... Now I shall pull from one of my favorite characters and say...
Run! Run away!
4/15/2012 c5 DFKJR
Great, you’ve finally did an update on one of your previous stories. That’s a rare thing to happen, as most authors don’t ever update again.
To me, this chapter was alright. It felt as if things are going slow to build up for something big later on. Overall, I like it very well.
On a different note, you’ve mention that there was “Mary and Sue: Kingdom Hearts” edition, but I didn’t see it on your profile. Was it deleted or something?
Great, you’ve finally did an update on one of your previous stories. That’s a rare thing to happen, as most authors don’t ever update again.
To me, this chapter was alright. It felt as if things are going slow to build up for something big later on. Overall, I like it very well.
On a different note, you’ve mention that there was “Mary and Sue: Kingdom Hearts” edition, but I didn’t see it on your profile. Was it deleted or something?
4/13/2012 c5 AlwaysNinja
L. O. Freaking L. So funny! I loves it, loved, loved, LOVED it.
And, I would review the other chapters, but I kinda already did, in a way. I'm Catherine with an account :)
So... More, now that you're back on it? Pleeeeaaassseee?
Thanks! Danke! Gracias! Merci!
Sayanora~ and Ciao.
L. O. Freaking L. So funny! I loves it, loved, loved, LOVED it.
And, I would review the other chapters, but I kinda already did, in a way. I'm Catherine with an account :)
So... More, now that you're back on it? Pleeeeaaassseee?
Thanks! Danke! Gracias! Merci!
Sayanora~ and Ciao.
4/13/2012 c2 This person loves kittens
Lolz. This is like, exactly how I roleplay. (Not when I'm trying to be serious, of course!) I love this soooooo much! Make some more, girl!
Lolz. This is like, exactly how I roleplay. (Not when I'm trying to be serious, of course!) I love this soooooo much! Make some more, girl!
4/13/2012 c4 Bob
apple crumble
apple crumble
4/13/2012 c5 10Boss-defeater451
I think that mysterious character was Dimentio. But why would he help Mary and Sue? I'll think I'll wait for the mystery to unveal.
10Boss-defeater451I think that mysterious character was Dimentio. But why would he help Mary and Sue? I'll think I'll wait for the mystery to unveal.
8/21/2011 c4 10Boss-defeater451
*Still hugged* Get this girl off me! _
Mary is way too strong... O_o If even Bowser loses... Poor Bowser... Gets made fun off so often... And poor Gary as well...
Peach is smart... Fleeing from overpowered Mary Sues is the best thing to do...
If there is a clue to your favorite pie in this story, I think it must be chocolate pie.
Chocolate? Did you just say... Chocolate?
YES SIR! WITH OR WITHOUT NUTS.
Chocolate? Chocolate! CHOCOLATE! CHOCOLATE!
*Note: Reviewer doesn't have an unnatural liking to chocolate.*
10Boss-defeater451*Still hugged* Get this girl off me! _
Mary is way too strong... O_o If even Bowser loses... Poor Bowser... Gets made fun off so often... And poor Gary as well...
Peach is smart... Fleeing from overpowered Mary Sues is the best thing to do...
If there is a clue to your favorite pie in this story, I think it must be chocolate pie.
Chocolate? Did you just say... Chocolate?
YES SIR! WITH OR WITHOUT NUTS.
Chocolate? Chocolate! CHOCOLATE! CHOCOLATE!
*Note: Reviewer doesn't have an unnatural liking to chocolate.*
8/20/2011 c4 TheGoofyMouse
Lol. this story never fails to make me laugh, keep it up. oh and im guessing either chocolate or pumpkin pie (i love pumpkin pie).
Lol. this story never fails to make me laugh, keep it up. oh and im guessing either chocolate or pumpkin pie (i love pumpkin pie).
8/19/2011 c3 rosi345
2 crazy girls...funny!
2 crazy girls...funny!
8/18/2011 c3 2jakeroo123
... And they don't question how Mario and Luigi pull giant mallets as large as themselves out of thin air?
2jakeroo123... And they don't question how Mario and Luigi pull giant mallets as large as themselves out of thin air?
8/18/2011 c3 Catherine
Oh my gosh, so funny! I had to cover my mouth with a pillow to avoid laughing, ya see, I'm supposed to be asleep :/
but wow, nice chappie :)
I love Mary and Sue. They are very funny. They remind me of me a little bit. I could totally see me doing what Mary does...
Well, please update again soon. I love!
Oh my gosh, so funny! I had to cover my mouth with a pillow to avoid laughing, ya see, I'm supposed to be asleep :/
but wow, nice chappie :)
I love Mary and Sue. They are very funny. They remind me of me a little bit. I could totally see me doing what Mary does...
Well, please update again soon. I love!