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8/14/2011 c1 ChristinaCastleSuperFan
I love how you write. And this story, it's cute. Wish it really happened on the show. :)
You know how to write.
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I love how you write. And this story, it's cute. Wish it really happened on the show. :)
You know how to write.
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8/13/2011 c1 
15knittingeek
This was so sweet...and yes anything can happen in fanfiction ;o)
Nothing wrong with cartwheels :o)
15knittingeekThis was so sweet...and yes anything can happen in fanfiction ;o)
Nothing wrong with cartwheels :o)
8/13/2011 c1 32LittleLizzieZentara
LOL I could just picture Lanie doing that! Alexis, not so much. Now I'm wondering if there are going to be any fangirls doing that when Caskett finally DOES get together. :) Kate's reaction was great. I love how she was all serious and then smiled afterwards. What a fun story.
32LittleLizzieZentaraLOL I could just picture Lanie doing that! Alexis, not so much. Now I'm wondering if there are going to be any fangirls doing that when Caskett finally DOES get together. :) Kate's reaction was great. I love how she was all serious and then smiled afterwards. What a fun story.
8/13/2011 c1 52SpecialAgentZiva
Well, you started off alright and the first half is actually quite good (though not entirely plausible but eh, I won't harp on you this time :'p). The dialogue was good; very in character. There really wasn't much for description but you gave us enough so, that part was alright, too.
Now the second half was not so great, in my opinion. You started off really well and could've kept it going, but you went into the land of incredibly cliché. Sometimes I don't mind clichés, but, in this case, I think you really could've at least put a new spin on the whole "Omg I love you!" "Omg I love you too!" *kiss* idea.
The 'celebration in the hallway' was interesting, though. I liked that part, for sure. :)
Just please, try not to stray into the incredibly cliché unless you're building up to said cliché.
52SpecialAgentZivaWell, you started off alright and the first half is actually quite good (though not entirely plausible but eh, I won't harp on you this time :'p). The dialogue was good; very in character. There really wasn't much for description but you gave us enough so, that part was alright, too.
Now the second half was not so great, in my opinion. You started off really well and could've kept it going, but you went into the land of incredibly cliché. Sometimes I don't mind clichés, but, in this case, I think you really could've at least put a new spin on the whole "Omg I love you!" "Omg I love you too!" *kiss* idea.
The 'celebration in the hallway' was interesting, though. I liked that part, for sure. :)
Just please, try not to stray into the incredibly cliché unless you're building up to said cliché.
8/13/2011 c1 jjship
as undignified as it would be, I too would cartwheel in the hallway..
In fanfiction, you can wake up from surgery, talk coherently and kiss someone passionately in my experience things are far too foggy and painful to think straight or move a muscle - which is why I really like this world
as undignified as it would be, I too would cartwheel in the hallway..
In fanfiction, you can wake up from surgery, talk coherently and kiss someone passionately in my experience things are far too foggy and painful to think straight or move a muscle - which is why I really like this world