for The Chosen Seven: The Earth's Rage2/16/2016 c28 Duesy3
This story is sooooo amazing! One of the best I have ever read! Please update! You haven't done so in a long time! :)
This story is sooooo amazing! One of the best I have ever read! Please update! You haven't done so in a long time! :)
6/18/2013 c28 
11hey.dovewings
Very good, as always! Sorry it took me so long to review. I really like how you're developing Connor's character in this. And searching the Aphrodite cabin with Rachel was hilarious! :) Keep up the good work!
-Dovewings
11hey.dovewingsVery good, as always! Sorry it took me so long to review. I really like how you're developing Connor's character in this. And searching the Aphrodite cabin with Rachel was hilarious! :) Keep up the good work!
-Dovewings
12/16/2012 c27 3Emmarina
I really loved the part when Alva shot Nico the birdie :D lol I think that just showed her personality so well and added some nice touch up humor to it lol.
The beginning of the chapter though seemed a little like fluff to me though, like it was filling things up but wasn't really needed. It got kind've... Dark I guess? I don't know but like it was just philosophical thoughts that some readers wouldn't care about and you would lose them there. Idk but I really liked how the god came in, talk about unlikely visitors eh? Lol I'm so curious on what's gonna happen next with Alva and her mother, plus I wanna meet her brother! XD
3EmmarinaI really loved the part when Alva shot Nico the birdie :D lol I think that just showed her personality so well and added some nice touch up humor to it lol.
The beginning of the chapter though seemed a little like fluff to me though, like it was filling things up but wasn't really needed. It got kind've... Dark I guess? I don't know but like it was just philosophical thoughts that some readers wouldn't care about and you would lose them there. Idk but I really liked how the god came in, talk about unlikely visitors eh? Lol I'm so curious on what's gonna happen next with Alva and her mother, plus I wanna meet her brother! XD
12/16/2012 c27 11hey.dovewings
Hermes! He's one of my favorite gods in the series. :D You did a great job with him. Alva is interesting as always... It's so cute that she can't stop thinking about Connor. ;) I can't wait to see what happens in Wyoming... Great chapter, as always!
11hey.dovewingsHermes! He's one of my favorite gods in the series. :D You did a great job with him. Alva is interesting as always... It's so cute that she can't stop thinking about Connor. ;) I can't wait to see what happens in Wyoming... Great chapter, as always!
12/9/2012 c26 3Emmarina
Omg so, sorrryy for the late review!
I think this chapter was really good i mean not bad for a person who "cant wriitte romance" :p lol. Add a slight metaphor here or therre k? I tthink the story could use that its pretty good though
3EmmarinaOmg so, sorrryy for the late review!
I think this chapter was really good i mean not bad for a person who "cant wriitte romance" :p lol. Add a slight metaphor here or therre k? I tthink the story could use that its pretty good though
12/1/2012 c26 11hey.dovewings
Aw! Poor Zena! :'( I am getting so curious about Vanessa, though... She's awesome. I want to know why she can do all these things! Alva, as always, was cool. And Vanessa and Nico... So adorable! I can't believe Alva ruined the moment! This story is still great. I can't wait for more!
-Dovewings
11hey.dovewingsAw! Poor Zena! :'( I am getting so curious about Vanessa, though... She's awesome. I want to know why she can do all these things! Alva, as always, was cool. And Vanessa and Nico... So adorable! I can't believe Alva ruined the moment! This story is still great. I can't wait for more!
-Dovewings
9/2/2012 c25 3Emmarina
Omg poor them! When can nico finally get the girl? Or at least see eye to eye with alva? Lol update! This is really good, u still got that writing touch :p lol.
3EmmarinaOmg poor them! When can nico finally get the girl? Or at least see eye to eye with alva? Lol update! This is really good, u still got that writing touch :p lol.
7/31/2012 c24 3TwinsOfNeptune
Hi. I've been following your story and I enjoyed it. But maybe, just a little, maybe it is getting a bit too dramatic. Just a personal opinion, but I'd like you to know anyway. Keep on it, I'll be waiting for the next!
3TwinsOfNeptuneHi. I've been following your story and I enjoyed it. But maybe, just a little, maybe it is getting a bit too dramatic. Just a personal opinion, but I'd like you to know anyway. Keep on it, I'll be waiting for the next!
7/29/2012 c24 3Emmarina
oh my gods that was awesome! the fighting, the flashback, even the hesitation connor had at the end when he was talking to rachel! its awesome keep writing!
3Emmarinaoh my gods that was awesome! the fighting, the flashback, even the hesitation connor had at the end when he was talking to rachel! its awesome keep writing!
7/29/2012 c24 11hey.dovewings
Wow. That was... intense. Poor Conner! The whole mother-thing just about made me nauseous. *Shudders* I feel so bad for him! The fight between the Stolls was bad, too. The idea of them fighting is so weird! But I can see how it would happen. Annabeth's breaking up the fight was perfect. Jenna, as always, is plenty creepy. I can't wait to find our what Rachel knows about her. Keep on writing!
11hey.dovewingsWow. That was... intense. Poor Conner! The whole mother-thing just about made me nauseous. *Shudders* I feel so bad for him! The fight between the Stolls was bad, too. The idea of them fighting is so weird! But I can see how it would happen. Annabeth's breaking up the fight was perfect. Jenna, as always, is plenty creepy. I can't wait to find our what Rachel knows about her. Keep on writing!
6/29/2012 c23 3Emmarina
Whoa! Omg Nico spilled the hot coco lol XD. Its good tension in the story with the Hunters and Nico's hatred toward them. Not to mention Alva. I mean if she pushed connor away and also dispises boys, why doesnt she join? I bet if she met her brother she wouldnt join (i wanna see him so badly too! when are alva's siblings coming into the story? lol XD)
The beginning of the chapter i was a little confused with her dream but once it transformed to the scene of her in a cave it was cleared. I think the dream of the battle was a bit of an omen though for some great fight thats going to happen huh? lol
by the way sorry for reviewing late! Summer school finally gave me a week off so i can finally update and post story's and everything! :) anyway keep writing! you know i'm anxious to hear about how alva's doing! lol
3EmmarinaWhoa! Omg Nico spilled the hot coco lol XD. Its good tension in the story with the Hunters and Nico's hatred toward them. Not to mention Alva. I mean if she pushed connor away and also dispises boys, why doesnt she join? I bet if she met her brother she wouldnt join (i wanna see him so badly too! when are alva's siblings coming into the story? lol XD)
The beginning of the chapter i was a little confused with her dream but once it transformed to the scene of her in a cave it was cleared. I think the dream of the battle was a bit of an omen though for some great fight thats going to happen huh? lol
by the way sorry for reviewing late! Summer school finally gave me a week off so i can finally update and post story's and everything! :) anyway keep writing! you know i'm anxious to hear about how alva's doing! lol
6/25/2012 c23 11hey.dovewings
A nice, long chapter! Alva's dream sequence was very exciting... She's such a good, complex character. :) Finding out more about Ethan was, of course, very interesting, as it always is. The fighting seemed creepy...
The Hunters! It's always nice to see them... But I do feel bad for Nico. :( I'm wondering where Thalia is, as well... It's sweet how highly Alva thinks of Vanessa. :) I think you captured Artemis really well, too! And I didn't know that jackalopes were mythical. Cool! :)
11hey.dovewingsA nice, long chapter! Alva's dream sequence was very exciting... She's such a good, complex character. :) Finding out more about Ethan was, of course, very interesting, as it always is. The fighting seemed creepy...
The Hunters! It's always nice to see them... But I do feel bad for Nico. :( I'm wondering where Thalia is, as well... It's sweet how highly Alva thinks of Vanessa. :) I think you captured Artemis really well, too! And I didn't know that jackalopes were mythical. Cool! :)