for crossover of the machines of two differnt worlds4/25/2021 c1 JauneDaArc
hiy dick heed leve my buddy me grimjaw aloen or i stab you fan fan troll
hiy dick heed leve my buddy me grimjaw aloen or i stab you fan fan troll
5/15/2013 c1 Ron
I like the story and the concept. The only problem I see is you could use " at the beginning of a characters dialogue and after. It will help readers know when you are narrating the story and when the characters are speaking. Other than that it is a good story
I like the story and the concept. The only problem I see is you could use " at the beginning of a characters dialogue and after. It will help readers know when you are narrating the story and when the characters are speaking. Other than that it is a good story
8/4/2012 c4 
1crazywolf1991
hey guys wulfreign here i changed my name from crazywolf to wulf but if yall read i dont care if yall review or not even though it is appreciated i will like to here any results and stuff but dont disect my story i understand when yall cough i dont expect this story to be awesome since i am an amateur author but also critics united if yall do review i appreciate it if you might tone it down maybe one peg and stuff not that i expect yall to read lol
1crazywolf1991hey guys wulfreign here i changed my name from crazywolf to wulf but if yall read i dont care if yall review or not even though it is appreciated i will like to here any results and stuff but dont disect my story i understand when yall cough i dont expect this story to be awesome since i am an amateur author but also critics united if yall do review i appreciate it if you might tone it down maybe one peg and stuff not that i expect yall to read lol