for The Angel4/11/2019 c1 CindyWindy1
Very nicely done with so much insight into each character. Wish there were more stories from this very talented author!
Very nicely done with so much insight into each character. Wish there were more stories from this very talented author!
4/5/2013 c1 Pixie's Mama
Just been reading your review for Betti's Little Green and decided to come over here. Your version of Edward as the avenging angel was mesmerizing in your own unique way. Thank you for sharing it with the world. :)
Just been reading your review for Betti's Little Green and decided to come over here. Your version of Edward as the avenging angel was mesmerizing in your own unique way. Thank you for sharing it with the world. :)
11/9/2011 c1 silverspiders
I am not religious or overtly emotional, but this story made me cry. For some reason, it was just touching. Thank you for sharing it.
I am not religious or overtly emotional, but this story made me cry. For some reason, it was just touching. Thank you for sharing it.
8/17/2011 c1 
2MadamThang
Wonderful. I love how you captured terrible beauty. This was so well written and I'm not just saying that because you are so loyal! You're talented!
2MadamThangWonderful. I love how you captured terrible beauty. This was so well written and I'm not just saying that because you are so loyal! You're talented!
8/16/2011 c1 4Willowby
Great story! Your villain was especially scary because he was calm, purposeful, and crazy as hell! Males with “mother issues” can be especially frightening, as was the case here. He wasn’t a bottom-feeder... he was well-dressed and groomed, meaning he fit in somewhere and nobody in his world knew that dark side of him. Creepy!
And that’s exactly how I pictured Edward during his “rebellious years.” Self-loathing, yet still principled and chivalrous (and HOT!) LOL I was glad he hunted that guy! If I had his mind-reading and vampire abilities, I might think being a proper vigilante wasn’t such a bad thing. This guy would have mutilated and killed poor Mary Frances and then gone on to his next string of unwitting victims. Edward stopped him. Although not an angel, he certainly was HER angel. He could rescue me anytime!
This line creeped me out more than just about anything else – Mary says to herself, “I needed to speak, as he had asked me a question and it was only polite to respond.” UGH! So many times, respect for social norms outweighs one’s own internal warning signals.
I loved how she described Edward, especially his hair. “It was an unruly mass of a unique shade...sort of a light brown with a reddish tinge to it. I wondered briefly why he didn't tame down the wayward strands with a good pomade, and then decided that it suited him, somehow, the disarray.”
That’s probably a weird thing to comment on, but I really liked the sentence structure. :-)
I was so tickled to see that you rec’d my story! Thank you so much. I’ve been having fun writing it and I’m so glad you’ve had fun reading it, too.
4WillowbyGreat story! Your villain was especially scary because he was calm, purposeful, and crazy as hell! Males with “mother issues” can be especially frightening, as was the case here. He wasn’t a bottom-feeder... he was well-dressed and groomed, meaning he fit in somewhere and nobody in his world knew that dark side of him. Creepy!
And that’s exactly how I pictured Edward during his “rebellious years.” Self-loathing, yet still principled and chivalrous (and HOT!) LOL I was glad he hunted that guy! If I had his mind-reading and vampire abilities, I might think being a proper vigilante wasn’t such a bad thing. This guy would have mutilated and killed poor Mary Frances and then gone on to his next string of unwitting victims. Edward stopped him. Although not an angel, he certainly was HER angel. He could rescue me anytime!
This line creeped me out more than just about anything else – Mary says to herself, “I needed to speak, as he had asked me a question and it was only polite to respond.” UGH! So many times, respect for social norms outweighs one’s own internal warning signals.
I loved how she described Edward, especially his hair. “It was an unruly mass of a unique shade...sort of a light brown with a reddish tinge to it. I wondered briefly why he didn't tame down the wayward strands with a good pomade, and then decided that it suited him, somehow, the disarray.”
That’s probably a weird thing to comment on, but I really liked the sentence structure. :-)
I was so tickled to see that you rec’d my story! Thank you so much. I’ve been having fun writing it and I’m so glad you’ve had fun reading it, too.