
5/15/2014 c1 Guest
Was it Charlie who called her in the first place? I almost thought it was Esme doing the job. She would never be happy with Carlisle beating Edward, either.
Was it Charlie who called her in the first place? I almost thought it was Esme doing the job. She would never be happy with Carlisle beating Edward, either.
1/10/2014 c1 Guest
A bit thin on details, and a big surprise at the end! I liked it very much.
A bit thin on details, and a big surprise at the end! I liked it very much.
10/6/2013 c1 Guest
This is AWESOME! I wondered who it would be, was leaning toward Heidi or someone, but LOVED that it was Renee. *mwhahahaaa*
Thanks for writing and sharing!
This is AWESOME! I wondered who it would be, was leaning toward Heidi or someone, but LOVED that it was Renee. *mwhahahaaa*
Thanks for writing and sharing!
4/18/2013 c1
3AmyZini
Enjoyed the twist. You have a really good ear for dialog, and a nice restrained style of writing.

Enjoyed the twist. You have a really good ear for dialog, and a nice restrained style of writing.
10/23/2012 c1 readingisbliss
Damn! Loved the twist at the end. Renee being the assassin and Charlie knowing about it was completely unexpected. I like it. A lot :)
Damn! Loved the twist at the end. Renee being the assassin and Charlie knowing about it was completely unexpected. I like it. A lot :)
8/20/2011 c1
3DreamOfTheEndless
Hey! Very interesting OS. I rarely read them, but you have done a very good job at keeping the suspense level up all the way through. I imagined the protagonist to be Edward, Jasper, even Aro. And once you made it clear it was a woman, I hazarded a guess at Bella or Esme. I did not expect her to be Renee even once. Very well done, bb! Wonderful work. Hope you will continue to write more stories:)
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Hey! Very interesting OS. I rarely read them, but you have done a very good job at keeping the suspense level up all the way through. I imagined the protagonist to be Edward, Jasper, even Aro. And once you made it clear it was a woman, I hazarded a guess at Bella or Esme. I did not expect her to be Renee even once. Very well done, bb! Wonderful work. Hope you will continue to write more stories:)
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8/20/2011 c1 SanguineTaurean
That was an unexpected twist at the end! I had no idea until the very last sentence when it all clicked. lol Good one!
That was an unexpected twist at the end! I had no idea until the very last sentence when it all clicked. lol Good one!
8/15/2011 c1 Swoozy
I loved the twist in this and you kept me guessing until the end. I never saw it coming but man on man...karma is a bitch!
Well done and very well written! You need to write more, lady! You've been holding out on us!
I loved the twist in this and you kept me guessing until the end. I never saw it coming but man on man...karma is a bitch!
Well done and very well written! You need to write more, lady! You've been holding out on us!