for Garden Of Eden: Remake4/16/2012 c4 Guest
Hmm...If Riddle knew the boy's exact birth date, it would have been easy to just sneakily have a look at the students files, particulary if he knows both the year and month of birth. With the exact day...Well, it's just child's play, a dead giveway of his "mate"'s identity. A genius such as him couldn't have missed this point.
Even then, any knowledge on the boy's birth date narrows the list of possible "candidates" quite importantly. Meaning, that he'd already suspect Harry, as well as a few other students.
Maybe you could instead have Riddle just vaguely sense a shift indicating Harry's coming of age ? And blur his memory of the date as you did for the boy's identity.
Moreover, in any case I think Riddle would narrow down his search to only Harry's year mates, since it was his presence that brought the man to Hogwarts to begin with. So I guess having Riddle remember roughtly the year, but neither month nor day, would be acceptable. It would keep the man guessing, with enough candidates to keep his attention from Harry.
Do remember that anything you write on the spur of the moment may have a repercussion on the rest of the story. Try to work with that, to your advantage. This way not only will you avoid discrepancies, but it will help you figuring out the plotline step by step.
Hmm...If Riddle knew the boy's exact birth date, it would have been easy to just sneakily have a look at the students files, particulary if he knows both the year and month of birth. With the exact day...Well, it's just child's play, a dead giveway of his "mate"'s identity. A genius such as him couldn't have missed this point.
Even then, any knowledge on the boy's birth date narrows the list of possible "candidates" quite importantly. Meaning, that he'd already suspect Harry, as well as a few other students.
Maybe you could instead have Riddle just vaguely sense a shift indicating Harry's coming of age ? And blur his memory of the date as you did for the boy's identity.
Moreover, in any case I think Riddle would narrow down his search to only Harry's year mates, since it was his presence that brought the man to Hogwarts to begin with. So I guess having Riddle remember roughtly the year, but neither month nor day, would be acceptable. It would keep the man guessing, with enough candidates to keep his attention from Harry.
Do remember that anything you write on the spur of the moment may have a repercussion on the rest of the story. Try to work with that, to your advantage. This way not only will you avoid discrepancies, but it will help you figuring out the plotline step by step.
4/9/2012 c4 
4Jenaminya
I don't usually read or like of this kind of AU fics, but this is brilliant! I just love this! I just can't wait to get to read more! The whole thing is just delicious!
I really hope that you'll write more soon!
-Jen
4JenaminyaI don't usually read or like of this kind of AU fics, but this is brilliant! I just love this! I just can't wait to get to read more! The whole thing is just delicious!
I really hope that you'll write more soon!
-Jen
3/26/2012 c4 redlilies
This is great :)
waiting for an update and too lazy to sign in... :)
This is great :)
waiting for an update and too lazy to sign in... :)
3/13/2012 c4 92Isys Luna Skeeter
loves the past memory
and i feel sorry for the vampire, have to wait all this time to find his mate, even though he supposedly already meat him
92Isys Luna Skeeterloves the past memory
and i feel sorry for the vampire, have to wait all this time to find his mate, even though he supposedly already meat him
3/5/2012 c4 jessicafauren
Its loooking great :) Update!
Its loooking great :) Update!
3/5/2012 c4 The deadening
Ohh no, the cliffhanger is going to kill me!
Ohh no, the cliffhanger is going to kill me!
3/5/2012 c3 The deadening
I love the title for this, I had to let you know
I love the title for this, I had to let you know
3/5/2012 c1 Thedeadening
It sounds awesome
It sounds awesome
3/5/2012 c4 She who quacks alot
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! why you do this to me? * weeps in corner* I simply cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! why you do this to me? * weeps in corner* I simply cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
3/5/2012 c4 Nomore1234
This is an interesting story, though i'm curious about who Hermione's mate is, i don't think it's Blaise.
This is an interesting story, though i'm curious about who Hermione's mate is, i don't think it's Blaise.
3/4/2012 c4 Jcr123
Oh man I can't wait for you to update. I hope it's soon. I like how Harry has some fire in him. "Why won't you just fuck off?" Perfect example XD It would be boring if he was just like, " oh, ok. Sure, I'll tell you my name and do whatever you say." And this is just a theory of mine, but maybe Tom has stopped hurting Harry over time like he did to Dean because he might have a feeling Harry is his mate but he's not 100% positive yet. I'm assuming Tom is the one Harry is dreaming about since they are the main pairing right? I hope so. I would really like to read the original version if you have it posted on another site somewhere?
Keep up the great work!
Oh man I can't wait for you to update. I hope it's soon. I like how Harry has some fire in him. "Why won't you just fuck off?" Perfect example XD It would be boring if he was just like, " oh, ok. Sure, I'll tell you my name and do whatever you say." And this is just a theory of mine, but maybe Tom has stopped hurting Harry over time like he did to Dean because he might have a feeling Harry is his mate but he's not 100% positive yet. I'm assuming Tom is the one Harry is dreaming about since they are the main pairing right? I hope so. I would really like to read the original version if you have it posted on another site somewhere?
Keep up the great work!
3/1/2012 c4 bgcasper
Wow. AU stories are usualy really hard to pull off. Most writters don't have the skill to change virually everything about the story. That being said you have done a really good job so far. I look forward to to seeing the rest of the story. Update soon please.
Wow. AU stories are usualy really hard to pull off. Most writters don't have the skill to change virually everything about the story. That being said you have done a really good job so far. I look forward to to seeing the rest of the story. Update soon please.