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42Marwana
Heya,
Loved this chapter^^
Wanted to ask something though: somewhere in this chapter, you state that Harry is the captain of Gryffindor's Quidditch team only to state later that Angelina is the Quidditch captain of Gryffindor...So who is the captain?
I vote for shorter chapters and faster updates.
~Marwana
42MarwanaHeya,
Loved this chapter^^
Wanted to ask something though: somewhere in this chapter, you state that Harry is the captain of Gryffindor's Quidditch team only to state later that Angelina is the Quidditch captain of Gryffindor...So who is the captain?
I vote for shorter chapters and faster updates.
~Marwana
8/16/2011 c1 Fireotaku18
I thought that the first Garden of Eden was good! But this blew it out of the water!
I thought that the first Garden of Eden was good! But this blew it out of the water!
8/15/2011 c1 DreamKaskade
Slower updates and longer chapters but I guess it would depend on how short you mean!
It was good. This looks to be moving faster!
Slower updates and longer chapters but I guess it would depend on how short you mean!
It was good. This looks to be moving faster!
8/15/2011 c1 1Anniriel
WOW! This remake is BRILLIANT! I so want to read the next chapter!
About the updates, I've always loved long chapters but if the updates are going to take too much time in between (3 weeks to 1 month or more), then I prefer the short chapters ^_^
I'm so glad you published this! =3
1AnnirielWOW! This remake is BRILLIANT! I so want to read the next chapter!
About the updates, I've always loved long chapters but if the updates are going to take too much time in between (3 weeks to 1 month or more), then I prefer the short chapters ^_^
I'm so glad you published this! =3
8/15/2011 c1 Pypera
A lovely tale. Glad to see you're giving this a second try, considering it is an excellent read. Can't wait to see what happens next.
A lovely tale. Glad to see you're giving this a second try, considering it is an excellent read. Can't wait to see what happens next.
8/15/2011 c1 2Hp-slash-crazy
I'm glad that you've kept with this story! It was good the first time but I like this even more!'=] I vote for longer chapters so I cant wait for your next update!:)
2Hp-slash-crazyI'm glad that you've kept with this story! It was good the first time but I like this even more!'=] I vote for longer chapters so I cant wait for your next update!:)
8/15/2011 c1 1Force Cookies
Yay! You've reposted!
I must say that I really like the way that this new version of the story is going. The fact that it's set in Harry's 5th year means that we get to the punch faster, which is really exciting.
I liked how you stuck Harry and Draco together, even if it seems that they're only friends with benefits. But I do feel really sorry for Tom. I mean he obviously has a very strong connection to Harry, even if he doesn't know who he is, and it must be awful to know that his mate is lusting after someone else, even if he is a hormonal teenager. But at the same time, it's kind of obvious that, while Harry cares for Draco, deep down he doesn't want to go too far, because Draco isn't the 'one'.
I wonder how Tom will react when he finds out who Harry is? I mean he'd love Harry no matter what, but would he be shocked? I know that you said that vampires sense their mate when they turn 16, but does Tom get a sense of something like that when Harry is near, or does it only happen when Harry is messing around with Draco?
Well Ioved the chapter, and am eagerly awaiting the next one. I noticed a couple of grammatical errors at the beginning, before we discover that the story is being told from Harry's POV, but I guess that they're OK if it's Harry's POV - I mean teenage boys aren't exactly known to have the best grasp of the english language!
As for chapter lengths v updating time, it's a much of a muchness. On the one hand, I love long chapters, but on the other, I love having the new chapter as soon as possible. I don't really think it matters, as long as you update semi-regularly. Just remember Quality, not Quantity. I don't think anyone cares how soon you update, or how long the chapter is as long as they get to read a well written story.
Well have fun!
Force Cookies ;o)
(Smiley)
1Force CookiesYay! You've reposted!
I must say that I really like the way that this new version of the story is going. The fact that it's set in Harry's 5th year means that we get to the punch faster, which is really exciting.
I liked how you stuck Harry and Draco together, even if it seems that they're only friends with benefits. But I do feel really sorry for Tom. I mean he obviously has a very strong connection to Harry, even if he doesn't know who he is, and it must be awful to know that his mate is lusting after someone else, even if he is a hormonal teenager. But at the same time, it's kind of obvious that, while Harry cares for Draco, deep down he doesn't want to go too far, because Draco isn't the 'one'.
I wonder how Tom will react when he finds out who Harry is? I mean he'd love Harry no matter what, but would he be shocked? I know that you said that vampires sense their mate when they turn 16, but does Tom get a sense of something like that when Harry is near, or does it only happen when Harry is messing around with Draco?
Well Ioved the chapter, and am eagerly awaiting the next one. I noticed a couple of grammatical errors at the beginning, before we discover that the story is being told from Harry's POV, but I guess that they're OK if it's Harry's POV - I mean teenage boys aren't exactly known to have the best grasp of the english language!
As for chapter lengths v updating time, it's a much of a muchness. On the one hand, I love long chapters, but on the other, I love having the new chapter as soon as possible. I don't really think it matters, as long as you update semi-regularly. Just remember Quality, not Quantity. I don't think anyone cares how soon you update, or how long the chapter is as long as they get to read a well written story.
Well have fun!
Force Cookies ;o)
(Smiley)
8/15/2011 c1 1Naila93
i loved your story. I have nothing against writers who choose to rewrite, I know lots about that, I just hope you update soon. I really want to see the harry/riddle interactions... Great chapter by the way!
1Naila93i loved your story. I have nothing against writers who choose to rewrite, I know lots about that, I just hope you update soon. I really want to see the harry/riddle interactions... Great chapter by the way!
8/15/2011 c1 Guest
This was good. I think I like your other one better so far though. Do you think you will ever finish the original?
This was good. I think I like your other one better so far though. Do you think you will ever finish the original?
8/15/2011 c1 12Emerald Sage
It was amazing! Please update as soon as you can! It's a brilliant story!
Em =D
12Emerald SageIt was amazing! Please update as soon as you can! It's a brilliant story!
Em =D
8/15/2011 c1 Danille the greatest
Sounds good update
Sounds good update
8/15/2011 c1 MYOWNREVIEW
You're story is amazing btw. I think you should write medium length chapters but not be too slow at updating. Short chapter are usually choppy but slow updates make people lose their interest in the story.
update when you can
sammy
You're story is amazing btw. I think you should write medium length chapters but not be too slow at updating. Short chapter are usually choppy but slow updates make people lose their interest in the story.
update when you can
sammy
8/15/2011 c1 Guest
Faster updates but shorter chapters.
Faster updates but shorter chapters.