11/3/2014 c1 Great
Huh, a different version but its good. Looking forward to more!
Huh, a different version but its good. Looking forward to more!
2/4/2014 c1 Quickslice
Picturing Ichigo smirking with the sunrise on his back and Zangetsu on his right shoulder, amazing!
Picturing Ichigo smirking with the sunrise on his back and Zangetsu on his right shoulder, amazing!
6/11/2012 c1 coolprettyangel2006
what an amazing job of writing. i had to go back and reread the manga chapters again after i read it.
what an amazing job of writing. i had to go back and reread the manga chapters again after i read it.
12/30/2011 c1 10Kireina-Ame
This and the story that precedes it are written absolutely beautifully. My only disappointment is in how short they ended. Awww. T_T Hilarious Ichigo versus Byakuya fights are almost as good as Ichigo and Rukia quarrels/sap/smut! (And because of the latter, the former is even better, hehe.)
This and the story that precedes it are written absolutely beautifully. My only disappointment is in how short they ended. Awww. T_T Hilarious Ichigo versus Byakuya fights are almost as good as Ichigo and Rukia quarrels/sap/smut! (And because of the latter, the former is even better, hehe.)
10/10/2011 c1 4Umayar
"Nii-sama, tell him I've grown," she demanded...
This gave me a mental image of Byakuya jumping in and defending Rukia over something stupid (like an overprotective brother who is actually expressive would do...except in extreme). Not Byakuya, I know, but a hilarious moment nonetheless. Byakuya being crazy as an overprotective brother...something I'd like to see...
Moving on, it's been a while. And hopefully I'll catch up to all your stories soon.
As for the review...I don't really know what to say. You just write so beautifully that I end up repeating pretty much the same thing in each review. It feels repetitive at my end...though I am sure you would enjoy it a lot :D (Let me add some more cool words to my vocabulary then...)
This feels more like a letter than a review...Anyways, keep up the good work!
All the best!
"Nii-sama, tell him I've grown," she demanded...
This gave me a mental image of Byakuya jumping in and defending Rukia over something stupid (like an overprotective brother who is actually expressive would do...except in extreme). Not Byakuya, I know, but a hilarious moment nonetheless. Byakuya being crazy as an overprotective brother...something I'd like to see...
Moving on, it's been a while. And hopefully I'll catch up to all your stories soon.
As for the review...I don't really know what to say. You just write so beautifully that I end up repeating pretty much the same thing in each review. It feels repetitive at my end...though I am sure you would enjoy it a lot :D (Let me add some more cool words to my vocabulary then...)
This feels more like a letter than a review...Anyways, keep up the good work!
All the best!
8/31/2011 c1 204Lalaith Quetzalli
I suppose this is in some way related to the most recent arc in the manga...haven't read it to be totally honest. Maybe once it's over I will...
I really liked this, even not knowing the exact context. It was good.
I suppose this is in some way related to the most recent arc in the manga...haven't read it to be totally honest. Maybe once it's over I will...
I really liked this, even not knowing the exact context. It was good.
8/18/2011 c1 2SaviorEmmaJones
Damn your good! That was wonderfully written! I mean, I know the first part is mostly from the manga, but you made it your own, and that is the sign of a true writer, in my opinion. I must have read this weeks manga chapter three to four times, now, but you still made it sound newe to me. Well done!
Damn your good! That was wonderfully written! I mean, I know the first part is mostly from the manga, but you made it your own, and that is the sign of a true writer, in my opinion. I must have read this weeks manga chapter three to four times, now, but you still made it sound newe to me. Well done!
8/17/2011 c1 4KitElizaKing
Aaah, so cute! You're about as high off of those last two chapters of the manga as I am. I'm way too old to be letting out girly squeals, but let me tell you, I was squealing it up when I read this weeks installment. It was so damned nice I had to read it twice! Really, just to get my teeny-delight under control. (And I ain't no teenager!) I love your writing. Keep it up, girl. Us Ichi/Ruki fans need all of the protection we can get against those forces of darkness and evil...those yaoi fans, and worse: the Ichi/Hime mutants.
High five!
And Thanks.
Aaah, so cute! You're about as high off of those last two chapters of the manga as I am. I'm way too old to be letting out girly squeals, but let me tell you, I was squealing it up when I read this weeks installment. It was so damned nice I had to read it twice! Really, just to get my teeny-delight under control. (And I ain't no teenager!) I love your writing. Keep it up, girl. Us Ichi/Ruki fans need all of the protection we can get against those forces of darkness and evil...those yaoi fans, and worse: the Ichi/Hime mutants.
High five!
And Thanks.
8/17/2011 c1 2dragonlord1337
*low whistle* That was awesome for a one shot and it did go along with this weeks chapter amazingly well. I give it a 10/10.
*low whistle* That was awesome for a one shot and it did go along with this weeks chapter amazingly well. I give it a 10/10.
8/17/2011 c1 MellyMonster
naww this was awesome ^^
i loved it, just finished reading this weeks chapter and this went with it so nicely ^^
and i think rukia's haircut looks awesome, well everyone 'new looks' look awesome tbh XP
naww this was awesome ^^
i loved it, just finished reading this weeks chapter and this went with it so nicely ^^
and i think rukia's haircut looks awesome, well everyone 'new looks' look awesome tbh XP