5/2/2023 c8 asjblackthorne
Please don't kill off Nev, I adore him so.
Glad to see Hermione learning, but I still think she's too good and Draco has the right idea killing off the DE's.
Please don't kill off Nev, I adore him so.
Glad to see Hermione learning, but I still think she's too good and Draco has the right idea killing off the DE's.
5/1/2023 c4 asjblackthorne
Hermione needs to realize what Draco was doing essentially WAS mercy killing. She's so stupidly self-righteous sometimes. I liked the Hermione who obliviated Draco much better. Hopefully she has a wakeup coming in this story. I was really hoping to see the fierce, "avenging angel" Hermione, who would eat her way through the Death Eater ranks like fire through flash paper. With the ever delicious Draco at her side, of course. I wanted to see them glorying in their blood lust and having freaky sex amidst a pile of bodies. Guess I'm morbid, lol.
Your writing is, as always, excellent. This is the 3rd of your stories I've read, and I plan on reading them all.
Hermione needs to realize what Draco was doing essentially WAS mercy killing. She's so stupidly self-righteous sometimes. I liked the Hermione who obliviated Draco much better. Hopefully she has a wakeup coming in this story. I was really hoping to see the fierce, "avenging angel" Hermione, who would eat her way through the Death Eater ranks like fire through flash paper. With the ever delicious Draco at her side, of course. I wanted to see them glorying in their blood lust and having freaky sex amidst a pile of bodies. Guess I'm morbid, lol.
Your writing is, as always, excellent. This is the 3rd of your stories I've read, and I plan on reading them all.
9/17/2022 c15 dadadada.t
I really like this story. I cannot express how much I like it. Very unique, very exciting.
I really like this story. I cannot express how much I like it. Very unique, very exciting.
9/3/2021 c20 MotekElm
I like the alternative ending that is HEA, but I don't think it would have been as good if I hadn't read the first ending that was not HEA first. because we needed the first story to see really how Draco felt with the vampire bloodlust.
I like the alternative ending that is HEA, but I don't think it would have been as good if I hadn't read the first ending that was not HEA first. because we needed the first story to see really how Draco felt with the vampire bloodlust.
9/2/2021 c10 MotekElm
excellent first ending, albeit tragic, not HEA.
I didn't realize this is really 2 stories, like a choose your own adventure, but vampire style
excellent first ending, albeit tragic, not HEA.
I didn't realize this is really 2 stories, like a choose your own adventure, but vampire style
9/2/2021 c4 MotekElm
if Draco is so powerful in this form, why not leave the DEs and feed off of bad guys?
if Draco is so powerful in this form, why not leave the DEs and feed off of bad guys?
7/10/2021 c19 Guest
Afore that you wrote two endings, love them both :)
Afore that you wrote two endings, love them both :)
6/2/2021 c10 SMLLWNNG
Your author’s note dialogue made me laugh and feel better. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
Your author’s note dialogue made me laugh and feel better. Can’t wait to see what’s next.
5/1/2021 c5 Guest
The sitting on the moon scene can still work. Just put them on the limb, watching the earth on the lunar horizon and introduce a crater edge or a cliff of some sort that casts a shaddow on them. perfextly possible (says someone with a degree in astronomy)
The sitting on the moon scene can still work. Just put them on the limb, watching the earth on the lunar horizon and introduce a crater edge or a cliff of some sort that casts a shaddow on them. perfextly possible (says someone with a degree in astronomy)
5/1/2021 c1 Guest
excellent first chapter :-) cant wait to see where this goes
excellent first chapter :-) cant wait to see where this goes