for Two Lonely Children5/31/2024 c9 Danny R Williams
A very good story about Naruto and Hinata.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and horror.
Sotry definitely deserves to be cpmtomied/
A very good story about Naruto and Hinata.
Story has plenty of action, suspense and horror.
Sotry definitely deserves to be cpmtomied/
5/5/2023 c9 Danny Williams
Great story.
Been so long since updated, need several updates to bring story up to date.,
Great story.
Been so long since updated, need several updates to bring story up to date.,
10/26/2022 c9 HenryManning
Good story and I hope that you dear author is ok and gonna update it soon!
Good story and I hope that you dear author is ok and gonna update it soon!
3/29/2022 c9 Danny Williams
Great story but we were left with a cliff hanger, hope that story is updated soon.
Great story but we were left with a cliff hanger, hope that story is updated soon.
11/20/2021 c9 Danny Williams
Great story.
Needs a lot of updates (please).
Great story.
Needs a lot of updates (please).
9/11/2021 c9 k.alexander.manning
Great story so far. Glad that they've made a friend and Gaara before everything started off. Wondering now that they've pass their test and going to their new home, what it's like. some fics might have a weapons Forge a blacksmith if you will some have underground training areas there's even one that has a pocket Dimension dedicated to the home itself. I am enjoying the story can't wait to see what you come up with.
Great story so far. Glad that they've made a friend and Gaara before everything started off. Wondering now that they've pass their test and going to their new home, what it's like. some fics might have a weapons Forge a blacksmith if you will some have underground training areas there's even one that has a pocket Dimension dedicated to the home itself. I am enjoying the story can't wait to see what you come up with.
6/18/2021 c9 Danny Williams
Still like this story.
Story has plenty of action and suspense.
Sure romance/esex will develope.
Story needs several updates.
Still like this story.
Story has plenty of action and suspense.
Sure romance/esex will develope.
Story needs several updates.
12/23/2020 c9 Danny Williams
Another great story with plenty of action and some humor.
Still like Hinata and Naruto being together.
Story could use a couple of updates.
Another great story with plenty of action and some humor.
Still like Hinata and Naruto being together.
Story could use a couple of updates.
11/1/2020 c9 Danny Williams
Enjoyed the story from start up and thru the last chapter.
I like that Hinata and Naruto are together and there for each other.
Could use some romance/sex scenes.
Hopefully update with come out shortly.
Enjoyed the story from start up and thru the last chapter.
I like that Hinata and Naruto are together and there for each other.
Could use some romance/sex scenes.
Hopefully update with come out shortly.
8/5/2019 c9 
5jerniman
Great story, hope to see an update - really interested in who will be assigned as their teammate.
5jernimanGreat story, hope to see an update - really interested in who will be assigned as their teammate.
8/3/2019 c7 jerniman
I am really enjoying the story so far. Very well written, and the flow moves the plot along pretty well. I will say that some of the dialog with Jiraiya, and the Hokage gets a bit redundant between chapters.
Also, the characters feel a bit older then where they should be, but it works with the situation they find themselves.
I am really enjoying the story so far. Very well written, and the flow moves the plot along pretty well. I will say that some of the dialog with Jiraiya, and the Hokage gets a bit redundant between chapters.
Also, the characters feel a bit older then where they should be, but it works with the situation they find themselves.
5/7/2019 c9 LB Cat
Thanks. This is a good story. Love it when a good Gaara is involve.
I hope you continue and update when you have time.
Thanks. This is a good story. Love it when a good Gaara is involve.
I hope you continue and update when you have time.