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5/5 c9 Danny Williams
Great story.
Been so long since updated, need several updates to bring story up to date.,
10/26/2022 c9 HenryManning
Good story and I hope that you dear author is ok and gonna update it soon!
3/29/2022 c9 Danny Williams
Great story but we were left with a cliff hanger, hope that story is updated soon.
11/20/2021 c9 Danny Williams
Great story.
Needs a lot of updates (please).
9/11/2021 c9 k.alexander.manning
Great story so far. Glad that they've made a friend and Gaara before everything started off. Wondering now that they've pass their test and going to their new home, what it's like. some fics might have a weapons Forge a blacksmith if you will some have underground training areas there's even one that has a pocket Dimension dedicated to the home itself. I am enjoying the story can't wait to see what you come up with.
6/18/2021 c9 Danny Williams
Still like this story.
Story has plenty of action and suspense.
Sure romance/esex will develope.
Story needs several updates.
3/17/2021 c2 Tchuma Tendai
Ainda bem k o Hiashi não é um cuzao
12/23/2020 c9 Danny Williams
Another great story with plenty of action and some humor.
Still like Hinata and Naruto being together.
Story could use a couple of updates.
11/28/2020 c9 16starfiction123
Aaand this one was also a great one that I wished was figured wow!
11/1/2020 c9 Danny Williams
Enjoyed the story from start up and thru the last chapter.
I like that Hinata and Naruto are together and there for each other.
Could use some romance/sex scenes.
Hopefully update with come out shortly.
8/5/2019 c9 5jerniman
Great story, hope to see an update - really interested in who will be assigned as their teammate.
8/3/2019 c7 jerniman
I am really enjoying the story so far. Very well written, and the flow moves the plot along pretty well. I will say that some of the dialog with Jiraiya, and the Hokage gets a bit redundant between chapters.

Also, the characters feel a bit older then where they should be, but it works with the situation they find themselves.
8/1/2019 c2 jerniman
Interesting story line, well written and flowed evenly throughout.
5/7/2019 c9 LB Cat
Thanks. This is a good story. Love it when a good Gaara is involve.
I hope you continue and update when you have time.
11/10/2018 c9 SGKaisa
I'm assuming gaara returned to the sand? should start your next chapter with a small sections describing his return, also maybe mention Jiraya fixing his terrible seal
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