for Two Lonely Children3/19/2014 c5 
9Dragon Man 180
Well... I wasn't quite expecting Gaara to want to come with Naruto and Hinata... and Suna won't be to eager to see their only Jinchuuriki leave. I love how the ox cart perplexes Hiruzen and Jiraiya so much.
9Dragon Man 180Well... I wasn't quite expecting Gaara to want to come with Naruto and Hinata... and Suna won't be to eager to see their only Jinchuuriki leave. I love how the ox cart perplexes Hiruzen and Jiraiya so much.
3/18/2014 c5 15Leaf Ranger
Oh wow. They made quite an impact on Gaara. So much so that he wants to go with them? Nice, very nice.
keep up the good work!
15Leaf RangerOh wow. They made quite an impact on Gaara. So much so that he wants to go with them? Nice, very nice.
keep up the good work!
3/15/2014 c4 33Leonas
This is rather interesting... Its well written... and I can't help but wonder... what's next? Will they try adn befriend garaa saving him from madness? Will they become suna shinobi? Will they move on? Will jiraiya find them and train them? Makes me curious.
33LeonasThis is rather interesting... Its well written... and I can't help but wonder... what's next? Will they try adn befriend garaa saving him from madness? Will they become suna shinobi? Will they move on? Will jiraiya find them and train them? Makes me curious.
5/31/2013 c4 11jubulicious
Yayyy! I hope Gaara is going to join their crew, even if it is temporary. I still can't believe how young Naruto is. He seems awfully wise and experienced even if he's only that age.
11jubuliciousYayyy! I hope Gaara is going to join their crew, even if it is temporary. I still can't believe how young Naruto is. He seems awfully wise and experienced even if he's only that age.
2/27/2013 c4 King Inna Norf
Bad author! No evil cliffhangers allowed! *smacks you with a rolled up newspaper*
In all seriousness, though, this is a great story. I'd love to see more of it.
Bad author! No evil cliffhangers allowed! *smacks you with a rolled up newspaper*
In all seriousness, though, this is a great story. I'd love to see more of it.