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4/11/2018 c9 1Bloody Rogue dragon deity king
What happened to Gaara, I mean I know he went home but did anything improve with him or what?
4/11/2018 c2 Batros940
Wow did Hiashi get whiplash from that 180 change of his feelings for his daughter. First he is cold and throws her out of the clan, then out of nowhere he cares about his daughter. Which is it?
4/10/2018 c1 777torn777
Honestly they could probably pull off a 3 man squad with Kakashi. Duel front line fighters. Hinata could be the more technical fighter, lighter on ninjutsu, maybe some medical training. Naruto being the heavy hitter and heavy ninjutsu spam with his reserves. Hinata could even be effective at genjutsu with the hyuga's natural chakra control. Just a suggestion. I'll read it either way :p
4/10/2018 c9 16Jewlbunny
So glad they're back. I assume Garra has gone home? Hope to read more soon.
4/10/2018 c9 1mrenteria99
Gaara where art thou
4/10/2018 c9 SPark681
So Mizuki failed once again and most likely will be killed trying to get the scroll of seals anyways keep up the great work!
4/10/2018 c9 1SPeCTeR-ll7
What happened to Gaara?
4/10/2018 c9 11nightwind83
good chapter, i wonder who your have there other teammate be and sensai.
4/10/2018 c9 Crimson Hawk Wolf
Good chapter but I was hoping that you would of added something about there new home before it ended since that would of been a great place to endedbit before the teams were assigned.
4/10/2018 c9 19storyreader21
Nice chapter. I wonder what happened to Gaara Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/10/2018 c9 2bloody dragon fang
interesting way to go
4/10/2018 c9 oneklm
Where is gaara ? Is he back to the suna ?
Anyway, I love it, I hope next chapt will longer than this..hehehehehe
4/7/2018 c8 16Jewlbunny
Lol. Now he knows it is a real ox cart. Now for the training to begin. Hope to read more soon.
4/4/2018 c8 Oliver W.K. Twist
Good chapter, keep up the good work. I'm fine with a time-skip, so long as it's properly elaborated on later, though I hate flashbacks. Also has to be well justified, I've seen way too many stories jump three or five years ahead for no other purpose than getting their characters to be the right age, while skipping out on a whole bunch of important events and backfilling later. Kinda like the source material for this... Anyway, looking forward to the next update.
4/4/2018 c8 3Chewie Cookies
Good stuff. Nice to see this get updated.

Keep up the good work!
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