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3/28/2018 c8 Naruhinalover20
Well this was a very fluffy chapter i loved it i dont remember hinata reading make-out paradise but i guess that is where her hidden perv comes from looking forward to see how they grow and see if garras siblings show how much they miss him and how much they do care for him when he comes back
3/28/2018 c8 5Hecseferblade
Good conclusion to the adventure, can’t wait to see what they are like after the time-skip
3/28/2018 c8 1TheWateringWizard
Haha I love Jiraiya’s surprise when he realises that’s it’s a literal ox cart !

Hinata and Naruto are the cutest !
3/27/2018 c8 9Dragon Man 180
I can't wait to see how Naruto, Gaara, and Hinata improve with Jiraiya dedicated to training them. I do love his disappointment over the ox cart being literal when he thought it was code for something I'm just glad Hiruzen didn't refer to the oxen as 'Two Big Milk Makers" otherwise Jiraiya would have been expecting at least one sexy woman, maybe two.
3/27/2018 c8 4RavenShadow
I love this story, thank you for the update.
3/26/2018 c8 2bloody dragon fang
this was a surprise, more so I feel that more will make things more interesting
3/26/2018 c8 28Thebestoftherest
Love his reaction to ox cart, although doesn't he still think they kidnap gaara from the leader of their village biggest ally leader?
3/26/2018 c8 marquis.shax
still very surprised that you haven't had Danzo sending his goons out for Naruto while he knew that Jiraiya was preoccupied with a mission. Also this works out for Gaara fairly well as I believe Jiraiya has an earth an fire affinity so he can teach Gaara some earth jutsu to go with his sand. Not really sure what he can do for Hinata as he's not exactly able to teach her gentle fist and his taijutsu while good I do believe it revolves around the toad style which he could teach Naruto but I'm not sure it would fit Hinata's style. As for Naruto well there's Summoning, there's Toad Style Taijutsu, Shadow Clones MAYBE not sure as it's a few years early for that, and of course at least get Naruto started on the foundation of Fuinjutsu as well as Hinata an Gaara if they're interested. Also I think you're mistaken about Jiraiya as there's no way he'd have more chakra, even with senjutsu that Gaara with Shukaku due to how his seal works, now it would be the opposite for Naruto as his seal is designed different an so he wouldn't have as much chakra as his seal keeps that chakra locked up an slowly drains a bit each day to add to Naruto's own reserves which along with being an Uzumaki means he'll eventually have reserves as large as Kisame naturally lol
3/26/2018 c8 QueenDeadPool
I liked it, I am excited to see where this goes. Great story.
3/26/2018 c7 marquis.shax
I think you should've kept the scroll that Temari gave explaining that Gaara could be taken out of the village by anyone willing. It could've been held on to by Hinata an then given to Jiraiya that way there'd be no issues later of accusing them of kidnapping or coercing Gaara into leaving or of Danzo saying that the Sand is using Gaara to try an lure Naruto an Hinata away from the leaf an knowing Danzo he'd use it as a means to start a war even if it meant using his ROOT agents to attack the Leaf disguised as Sand nin
3/26/2018 c8 SPark681
Nice chapter gotta wonder how strong these three will be in two years anyways keep up the great work!
3/26/2018 c8 15Leaf Ranger
So, our trio has been taken in by Jiraiya, to be trained by him. Nice. very nice.

Overall, good chapter! Keep it up!
3/26/2018 c8 1R-king 93
Nicely done with this chapter.
3/26/2018 c8 11nightwind83
good chapter, though I could easly see jjiraiya given some cryptic massage on to the third with the intent of confusing him. then probly failing to do so
3/26/2018 c8 Crimson Hawk Wolf
This was a great chapter but I will admit that I hope that when they go back to the village that they will be able to live together and be on a Genin team together. It would suck for them to go through so much like this just to go back to being separated.

Then again it’s you after all so I can see you doing that anyways lol.
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