for Shall it be Lima or Stockholm?10/22/2011 c7 
15Yankee-Chan
Haha the part with Jubia was so funny ! xD
Oh God, I love the end of the chapter, Gajeel thinks about naughty things *nosebleed*
I can't understand why an awesome story like this haven't a lot of reviews... People are crazy ? O_O Can't they notice good fanfics ? So stupid are they ! -'
This story is absolutely perfect ! *Q* I love it so much ! Good luck for the next ! ^^
15Yankee-ChanHaha the part with Jubia was so funny ! xD
Oh God, I love the end of the chapter, Gajeel thinks about naughty things *nosebleed*
I can't understand why an awesome story like this haven't a lot of reviews... People are crazy ? O_O Can't they notice good fanfics ? So stupid are they ! -'
This story is absolutely perfect ! *Q* I love it so much ! Good luck for the next ! ^^
10/22/2011 c7 13Medley Nightfallen
Hehe I really liked the part with Juvia and the bath XD
I wonder if Levy's father tried to drowned her or else...
I can't help but imagine (with some apprehension but excitment ^^) the moment when Levy would awake from her broken mind (well if you planned to do so or if it's even possible)
Keep going! Can't wait for the next one! (holy crap you updated fast! I didn't expect that! ^^) I also need your writing to live! XD
13Medley NightfallenHehe I really liked the part with Juvia and the bath XD
I wonder if Levy's father tried to drowned her or else...
I can't help but imagine (with some apprehension but excitment ^^) the moment when Levy would awake from her broken mind (well if you planned to do so or if it's even possible)
Keep going! Can't wait for the next one! (holy crap you updated fast! I didn't expect that! ^^) I also need your writing to live! XD
10/20/2011 c6 Medley Nightfallen
KAH! That was cute and very creepy at the same time. The way Gajeel didn't manage to kill his anger completely, and the way Levy seemed to have her own demon really scared me. I don't know how to explain, but Levy terrified me much more than Gajeel did. (Maybe because Gajeel seemed to turn softer and Levy seemed to have more rage with each chapter. As if they were slowly exchanging their personalities)
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one (more action huh? ^w^). And as you (nearly) say: UPDATE DAMNIT! XD
KAH! That was cute and very creepy at the same time. The way Gajeel didn't manage to kill his anger completely, and the way Levy seemed to have her own demon really scared me. I don't know how to explain, but Levy terrified me much more than Gajeel did. (Maybe because Gajeel seemed to turn softer and Levy seemed to have more rage with each chapter. As if they were slowly exchanging their personalities)
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one (more action huh? ^w^). And as you (nearly) say: UPDATE DAMNIT! XD
9/27/2011 c5 jUSTMiNAA
all i have to say is
there are some grammar mistakes :DD but its okay cause i still understand
but you should still fix it :DD
and lastly
:] suchhhhhh a cute chapter! :DD
all i have to say is
there are some grammar mistakes :DD but its okay cause i still understand
but you should still fix it :DD
and lastly
:] suchhhhhh a cute chapter! :DD
9/25/2011 c5 Prar
This is... so different! But so CUTE anyway!
I feel bad for Levy for losing her emotions, and i have a feeling that this is where stockholm begins. Especially when she'll regain them back.
Lily is awesome. As ever.
...
Now don't you dare to treat my life.
This is... so different! But so CUTE anyway!
I feel bad for Levy for losing her emotions, and i have a feeling that this is where stockholm begins. Especially when she'll regain them back.
Lily is awesome. As ever.
...
Now don't you dare to treat my life.
9/25/2011 c5 15Yankee-Chan
Oooowwwwww Gajeel was so sweet ! 3 *squee*
Don't tell me Levy is completely amnesic ! o_O Noooooo !
And Jose is a bastard ! I hate him so much ! Gajeel must kick him out ! XD
Awesome ! This chapter was perfectly awesome ! 3 I love it !
15Yankee-ChanOooowwwwww Gajeel was so sweet ! 3 *squee*
Don't tell me Levy is completely amnesic ! o_O Noooooo !
And Jose is a bastard ! I hate him so much ! Gajeel must kick him out ! XD
Awesome ! This chapter was perfectly awesome ! 3 I love it !
9/24/2011 c5 13Medley Nightfallen
Wow! I don't know if it was sweeter or darker than the previous chapters.
Sure Gajeel showed his softer side but Levy had been so hurt and shocked that she lost her mind. Will she remember or recover? Or doesn't she need it anymore?
I don't really know how to explain but I felt uneasy when I read this one (it doesn't mean I didn't like it because it was a great job again!). It's just so different comparing to the others that I was wondering if I hadn't missed a chapter or an event before this one. Or maybe it's because Gajeel softened slowly and began to put himseft in danger when this kind of feelings shouldn't be allowed in mafia.
...I guess I'm thinking/talking too much. Sorry for the blabla ^^
Can't wait for the next one! *0*
13Medley NightfallenWow! I don't know if it was sweeter or darker than the previous chapters.
Sure Gajeel showed his softer side but Levy had been so hurt and shocked that she lost her mind. Will she remember or recover? Or doesn't she need it anymore?
I don't really know how to explain but I felt uneasy when I read this one (it doesn't mean I didn't like it because it was a great job again!). It's just so different comparing to the others that I was wondering if I hadn't missed a chapter or an event before this one. Or maybe it's because Gajeel softened slowly and began to put himseft in danger when this kind of feelings shouldn't be allowed in mafia.
...I guess I'm thinking/talking too much. Sorry for the blabla ^^
Can't wait for the next one! *0*
9/15/2011 c4 15Yankee-Chan
Wow ! What a great story ! So sad and absorbing ! I rarely read a story written as well! ^w^ What can I tell more ? I love it! Gajeel is so cold and scary! Hypnotizing! I am even more crazy about him when he is like that! xD Even if he is a bastard too... And Levy! I think I cried many times ! T_T I love your story and look forward to the update! ^^
Oh, and sorry if I don't comment a lot, I am French, I still can't speak English very well -'. But that doesn't change the fact that I love this story! Keep it up! ;)
15Yankee-ChanWow ! What a great story ! So sad and absorbing ! I rarely read a story written as well! ^w^ What can I tell more ? I love it! Gajeel is so cold and scary! Hypnotizing! I am even more crazy about him when he is like that! xD Even if he is a bastard too... And Levy! I think I cried many times ! T_T I love your story and look forward to the update! ^^
Oh, and sorry if I don't comment a lot, I am French, I still can't speak English very well -'. But that doesn't change the fact that I love this story! Keep it up! ;)
9/12/2011 c4 13Medley Nightfallen
Like always it was amazing! *0*
I have a tens of questions and scenario in my head, but I will just wait calmly ("calmly"... how can I be calm with this? I'm too excited! ^^).
Just one thing please : who says : "Broken, who says I'm broken?" ? I'm not sure. Thanks.
I'll be waiting for the next one! *0*
13Medley NightfallenLike always it was amazing! *0*
I have a tens of questions and scenario in my head, but I will just wait calmly ("calmly"... how can I be calm with this? I'm too excited! ^^).
Just one thing please : who says : "Broken, who says I'm broken?" ? I'm not sure. Thanks.
I'll be waiting for the next one! *0*
8/29/2011 c3 Medley Nightfallen
TT_TT That was sad ! And great again !
Urgh ! Who's the man which just entered Levy's... room ? Gnnnnn ! I don't like him (just a bad, very bad, feeling)
Will you write something about Levy's past too ?
I can't wait for the next one ! *0* (puppy eyes)
TT_TT That was sad ! And great again !
Urgh ! Who's the man which just entered Levy's... room ? Gnnnnn ! I don't like him (just a bad, very bad, feeling)
Will you write something about Levy's past too ?
I can't wait for the next one ! *0* (puppy eyes)
8/28/2011 c3 21Asteriia
Good portrayal of Gajeels turmoil but confused by the ending, is the girl his daughter?
21AsteriiaGood portrayal of Gajeels turmoil but confused by the ending, is the girl his daughter?
8/28/2011 c3 13Prar
i give you that review even if i am forbidden to sit on the computer. Here you go.
Chapter was awesome, and sad.
Update!
13Prari give you that review even if i am forbidden to sit on the computer. Here you go.
Chapter was awesome, and sad.
Update!
8/21/2011 c2 13Medley Nightfallen
Urgh that was really... Harsh ? Creepy ? Violent ? Sad ? All of it ? Certainly, that's why it was so great !
I enjoyed the way Gajeel tortured her (I mean he closed his eyes at first. Was it to enjoy Levy's pain better or to avoid seeing his own acts ?)
I cant' wait for more ! I wish I could review you a hundred time to have the next one right now *0* (but don't hurry yourself, you may not be happy with your next writting if you do so ^^)
13Medley NightfallenUrgh that was really... Harsh ? Creepy ? Violent ? Sad ? All of it ? Certainly, that's why it was so great !
I enjoyed the way Gajeel tortured her (I mean he closed his eyes at first. Was it to enjoy Levy's pain better or to avoid seeing his own acts ?)
I cant' wait for more ! I wish I could review you a hundred time to have the next one right now *0* (but don't hurry yourself, you may not be happy with your next writting if you do so ^^)
8/19/2011 c1 XeringSnake
I gotta say.. you are amazing, the whole guild think magic without been specific the "Fairy Tail" that we all know but a whole knew story from the same, where you actually can found the character without any OC, i totally figure Gajeel acting soo rude and cool , i need to confess , i didnt feel like reading i just gotta out of work and i didnt sleep really well, but i give it a try, since i saw the chapter last night, and you know what, i got stock, totally hypnotize by the story, i would read the second chapter? hell yeah!, but that would not be know believe me i really want but my body need rest, wait for my next comment, and again THIS IS AMAZING!
keep up the hard Work
XeringSnake ya ne!
I gotta say.. you are amazing, the whole guild think magic without been specific the "Fairy Tail" that we all know but a whole knew story from the same, where you actually can found the character without any OC, i totally figure Gajeel acting soo rude and cool , i need to confess , i didnt feel like reading i just gotta out of work and i didnt sleep really well, but i give it a try, since i saw the chapter last night, and you know what, i got stock, totally hypnotize by the story, i would read the second chapter? hell yeah!, but that would not be know believe me i really want but my body need rest, wait for my next comment, and again THIS IS AMAZING!
keep up the hard Work
XeringSnake ya ne!