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4/9/2021 c2 Guest
Who did she blow up at? Is Leah a wolf?
2/11/2017 c8 Guest
9/12/2014 c9 BeautifulBella18
I can't believe this story has stopped for now... I'd love to take it off your hands and continue it. I have a ton of ideas of where it could go... :)
9/5/2013 c8 Guest
I love it , keep writing PLZ
8/18/2012 c9 2That-Lady
Hey, I loved this story for a couple reasons:
She had a pretty bad past, making her way more realistic than Bella in the story
You made the Vampires the bad guys (thank god, back to their roots!)
And she had some pretty kick butt powers

Here's a critique:
Grammar grammar grammar dear, ask a friend to proof read your stuff, or read over it once or twice before posting.
There is a lot of information missing, maybe add a little more imagery and details (specifically her powers?)
The scene transitions were a little off. Maybe use dashes, symbols, or "two days later:"
Character development, give them a certain amount of... je ne sais quoi (I don't know what is the direct translation, but basically means unique-ness culturally)
4/16/2012 c8 tinkerbear10
aww its cute and i hope there is more to it
4/15/2012 c8 6Angel-Of-Death-136
woooooooooooooooooooooo! excellent update I'm really liking the story I'd like to read more soon ^_^
4/12/2012 c8 2blackangel150
ahahahah lol
4/12/2012 c8 xelacy
wow! awesome
2/12/2012 c7 9b.bumblebee
Loved it! Please update soon!
1/29/2012 c7 29MysticalKC
Amazing chapter! I love it! Please update soon! :D
1/29/2012 c7 2YourNotGonnaChangeMe
I love your story's can't wait to read more. :-)
1/21/2012 c6 7AnnaKathlyn15
its interesting. i would like to read more!
11/26/2011 c6 6Angel-Of-Death-136
Loving the story Han update soon I wanna now what happens next Liz ^_^
11/10/2011 c6 2queen of terror
forgot to add this but you can also have the guys (especially) jared say something nice to her like we love you being around and your family well always be here to protect you
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