
3/10/2013 c7 Brina
Shiyomi should be a mouse.
Shiyomi should be a mouse.
9/3/2012 c8 Emina333
Do you have an editor? I have found many grammar and spelling mistakes and would love to be your editor. You ha e an excellent writing skill and improving your spelling/ grammar would improve your readers. Please think about my offer. Love the story by the way! :D I'm on my phone and it won't let me log in but when I get the chance for the computer, I will log on my username is Emina333 and if you need you can reach me at
Do you have an editor? I have found many grammar and spelling mistakes and would love to be your editor. You ha e an excellent writing skill and improving your spelling/ grammar would improve your readers. Please think about my offer. Love the story by the way! :D I'm on my phone and it won't let me log in but when I get the chance for the computer, I will log on my username is Emina333 and if you need you can reach me at
10/21/2011 c7 SmittyCat
The villains! OMG! anyway Soul-kun likes Maka-chan! CUTE! as for the Master's name... how about Hitoshi? great work!
The villains! OMG! anyway Soul-kun likes Maka-chan! CUTE! as for the Master's name... how about Hitoshi? great work!
10/21/2011 c4 SmittyCat
:O MURDERED! Dang! anyway that little SoMa scene was sooooo adorable! I loved this chapter! keep up the good work
:O MURDERED! Dang! anyway that little SoMa scene was sooooo adorable! I loved this chapter! keep up the good work
10/21/2011 c3 SmittyCat
*gasps* NOT HER! :O the horror! XD ok anyway who was the mysterious caller making that threat? and Blair-chan is so cute!
Maka reminds me so much of me when I was little I used to have Papa read all kinds of stories to me but unlike her my parents are still together... Poor Maka...
Anyway now I really wanna know what happens next chap!
*gasps* NOT HER! :O the horror! XD ok anyway who was the mysterious caller making that threat? and Blair-chan is so cute!
Maka reminds me so much of me when I was little I used to have Papa read all kinds of stories to me but unlike her my parents are still together... Poor Maka...
Anyway now I really wanna know what happens next chap!
10/21/2011 c2 SmittyCat
*le gasp* He's keeping secrets from his partner! Although I can truly understand that yup! Your writing is really good and I like it :)
*le gasp* He's keeping secrets from his partner! Although I can truly understand that yup! Your writing is really good and I like it :)
10/21/2011 c1 SmittyCat
*whistles* I liked this first chap chicka! Looks very interesting I shall keep reading!
*whistles* I liked this first chap chicka! Looks very interesting I shall keep reading!
10/14/2011 c7 Lbell107
Great story keep going :) update soon... Please!
Great story keep going :) update soon... Please!
9/8/2011 c5
4s0uleaterevans
-tranforms his arm into a scythe blade- update soon or i will eat your soul -laughs evily-

-tranforms his arm into a scythe blade- update soon or i will eat your soul -laughs evily-